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Read MoreI was born from two people who did not know what they created A force to be reckoned with, never to be underestimated. As I walk into the room, all eyes are on me. Smooth like iceNot seeing the fire being set free What they don't...
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Don’t you dare leave.
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Um…duly noted. Definitely destruction incarnate
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Thank you, Willow
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This is rather unsettling knowing the devastation that’s so common these days with active shooters. Very scary.
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I did not want you to feel that way. Going with the prompt I created with Ambyr, He picked creation, and I chose to go with devastation. That encompasses Fire, Water, Ice
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No problem. The poem has a lot of weight to it and a lot of fire in its delivery.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a change of pace my friend, you always prove there is no subject you can’t tame. It’s too close to call, you both delivered amazing writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I needed to stretch and get out of comfort zone
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You nailed this one. No doubt about it. The kind of write that pulls you along in an inexorable tide of power and rhyme. I keep envisioning cement shoes while reading 😁
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Haha well that’s interesting. Thank you Detritus
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Read MoreYou touched my heart today And the memory made me smile I wish that you had been here too To share that smile with you You come in unexpected ways Sometimes soon or in a while And an imprint on my heart is made And soul...
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This made me think of my dad. He’s gone but still here in my heart, in smiles & in laughter especially. This is beautiful
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I think we all have that special someone for whom time and distance doesn’t matter to the heart 🌼
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We all long for a love the heart remembers at random times and whiles, as if it was new 🌼
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Indeed 🌼
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I’m sure it’s a quote from someone but I’m too lazy to google it right now and see but this reminded me of the sentiment, ‘those we love never truly leave us’.
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In life or death, true love knows no bounds. At least, that’s my belief 🌼
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This makes me think of the song “I’ll be there”, by The Escape Club.
“On the edge of a waking dream
Over Rivers
Over Streams
Through Wind and Rain
I’ll be there
Across the wide and open sky
Thousands of miles I’d fly
To be with you
I’ll be there”-
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Just gave it a listen. The song wasn’t on my radar when the poem was written but I can understand being able to relate the two. I set words free into the ether and then sit back and watch as each gives their own connections to the words. Some things I’ve really worked over and liked barely received a blip of reaction. Some things have just come to me and I never gave a second thought to, and got raved over by comparision.
I liked this because it was short and sweet, spoke volumes in a pint size, and rhymed – which is a struggle for me, so I guess the stars aligned. For me it had nothing to do with death at all, but i can understand that too. Once you’ve set something free it takes on a life of its own. And that’s as it should be.
Thank you stopping to share a comment and the song 🌼
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You’re welcome. You are very talented.
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Thank you, what a wonderfully generous compliment. And I look forward to hearing more penned from your creative mind🌼
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Dear AJ,
Oh, you’re welcome. You know how I enjoy touching your heart especially when candy is involved. 🤭
I’m always gobsmacked by my own response when I read something that will stop and make me think how I can be better at being more generous. For me, this write had me thinking just that. Have I been generous especially with those I love? I really enjoyed the tenderness of this piece. Lovely write, as per. H🌷
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Well, now that everyone knows who my muse was, it makes me wonder why you told me to just keep it anonymous!
But you’re here now, so there’s no point in pining on about you with a silly poem – I’ve missed you!Btw…You haven’t seen my Recchiuti Confections Black Box chocolates have you? Just wondering. I can’t seem to find them anywhere? 🌼
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I said Accurate, not anonymous. 🙄😂
I know nothing about a delicious chocolate covered caramel in the Recchiuti Confections Black Box hiding behind the coffee tin.😳 🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🥰
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Read MoreDo you ever wonder, like, what would be the most horrible way to die?"For me, it's a bunch of old men, biting and eating me alive", she saidHey! Get some light over here Trash, is taking her clothes off again"That...
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Zombie’s eating you alive is the worst way to die in my opinion. Nice piece Keith
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Totally agree. Thanks Fia. xox
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Appreciate you!!
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Walking Dead and nuclear war in such a short piece…impressive!
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Always try & keep it short & to the point. Thanks Paula.
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hello dearest Benny my heart sank at first I thought you were in the icu of the hospital… I’m glad you are alright and keeping your eyes open for treachery 💕
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Good luck with that! LOL.
Cool little ditty, btw.
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Read MoreOn the margin of some pagesHeart felt feelingsExclamationsWritten largeJoy or sorrowWonderOr most preciousLoveEvoked by some now sacred passage Emblem redThe petals bedewedDancing among thornsFragrant the roseWhose beauty wounds Innocence lostIn sweetnessBut the sweet of the appleNot so sweet by half as...
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hello dearest Joe this is so beautifully wistful it reads as a melondious spell 💕
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Isn’t love a spell in truth? But you know, the romantic in you knows its true 🌼
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I agree with the comments above. This is tender and wistful. A very enjoyable read for me tonight.
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Thanks for saying so. I’m afraid I was birthed with a love for romanticism, esoterica, and nature – and the inability to fully capture what I want to say about either. Still, it doesn’t hurt to try.
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Love heals, love consumes, and sometimes breaks all we knew. 🌼
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fucking shit…. I left for a few weeks now you want me dead… ok im leaving