Demons hang around in places, like cobwebs, if one doesn’t wipe the slate. Fantastic!

Whew! I love your raw, unfiltered honesty. Something about this itches my brain; I think it’s the way you stack the questions on top of one another. I feel the exhaustion and longing, and you do this without pretending to have it all figured out. Thank you for the read.

Great honest write PG.

Suffering , if you can survive it, will not provide answers but it will stop the questions.Keep in mind always and believe it to be so that ‘nothing is permanent’.

Keep writing until the pen runs dry.
🙏

Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend this was raw and authentic. I felt this, nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Our faith is believing our tomorrows will be better than our todays, nothing else. It all simply falls into place when we remove negativity, invert all sadness with the quickness. Tight

Thank you for reading <3 xx

Well damn this is intense and written with passion. The ending gave it softness and tenderness. loved it

This is incredible, my friend. Written with emotions, that could light a match…smoking a cigarette.

Chère PG.,
Hope this finds you well?!

What a gentle ending you’ve made of this.

And what a lovely piece of work!
Kind regards, Gus

Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. I always dig the layers in your work, fantastic storytelling, tied together with the conclusion of being in a better state of being by the end. Nicely done per usual, I’m a fan. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank god he came … or we would all have been fucked … nicely done

You always find yourself when you don’t realize it.
23 sounded like a good year of life for you!

Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write with a very powerful message. Writing is therapy I agree with you completely. No matter how creative I get with a poem or lyrics there is always a therapeutic quality even as simple as getting something off my chest. Very relatable piece lets me know I’m not alone in the world. Appreciate you.

Damian

PG

When the darkness surrounds you and you think of the unthinkable remember this.
You have to be alive to find peace.Death just brings death.
Now you take care and keep writing.

🙏💋🙏

This is powerful and the images and words are delicately constructed. Always move forward PG, never look back. Well written.

Great piece. There’s also a hidden but great message in here. Yes, kick your kids out of the nest. But let them know if pressure builds, if the world becomes to much, the door opens both ways and they’re always welcome. So many people commit the acts that they do, endure the abuse that they do because they have no where’s to return to

Your muse has the answer of your being, so continue to let the words flow and live as you dream…but don’t any wooden nickels, are flying monkeys.

I love this because, the dark is my friend when scribbling. The dark is an embryo in the womb of the mind. Keep on, getting on with your writing.

Atticus Abbey/Adagio

Very well expressed. It is a well-felt plea that we all can relate to. Your version is precise and captures the feelings well.
Now cheer up! 😉

Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. Your plea is so authentic and real, and your reading expresses the emotional element of the words themselves. We all face self-doubt and our vulnerability escapes through our deepest fears sometimes. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is one captivating write. the audio and image give this a wonderful, short story vibe. Well said. Today is Wednesday and your alive…smile.