Brilliantly penned, P.G. Incredible chapter my friend, you’re a natural storyteller. You sure this is your first time writing stories in this format? lol. Love the character development as well. Appreciate you.

Damian

Keith, you rock! I appreciate you and your kind words as always my friend. Just wait, it gets better.

xx

~P.G💋

You go Camryn. Do not take that tone. lol
I am enjoying this story a lot and I know a lot of Italian-American people who have that Jersy accent. Love the imagery.

Beautifully penned, P.G. The plot thickens, I like the shift in perspective, a different character a different point of view. Also reveals information to fill in the gaps between characters that only the reader is privy to, nicely done. Great flow on the information in the dialogue revealed by Mr. Knight. I think you’re a natural at this writing thing. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much, Keith. That means everything when you are constantly floating in a sea of uncertainty. xx
~P.G💋

Line and sinker.. I’ll make sure to keep reeling you in, Adira 😉 xx
~P.G💋

Ooo she is in his sights. I love the devilish demeanor he has.

Who wouldn’t be a fan of that? Great ink.

I appreciate you. xx
~P.G💋

Seductively penned, P.G. A quicken your pulse kinda flavor to this write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Keith, thank you! I guess that means I can consider mission accomplished. Like I told Damian, I’ve gotta keep that blood flowing to all the right places. Thank you my friend, I hope you do as well. xx
~P.G💋

Mmm, the way your words stroke the page it’s like you’re reaching into my fantasies and bringing them to life. I’m burning with fire for what comes next. Show me how deep this desire goes, I’m ready for every word.