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Read MoreHer feet scorchesthe Earth,with every blistering step. Resentment within herselffor all those long nights she wept. Hating herself for losing control of things;In her mind on a loop— “They will pay.All they do is,Lie,steal,fuck,and scheme.” But now...now,she is a walking revelation. Her heart,...
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Well damn this is intense and written with passion. The ending gave it softness and tenderness. loved it
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Thank you, sweet Fia. xx
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
This is incredible, my friend. Written with emotions, that could light a match…smoking a cigarette.
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Handle the flame with care, my dear friend. xx
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![Profile picture of Duhsjaak]()
Chère PG.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a gentle ending you’ve made of this.
And what a lovely piece of work!
Kind regards, Gus-
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Gus, it is always a pleasure..thank you for your kind words.
I hope all is well! xx
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. I always dig the layers in your work, fantastic storytelling, tied together with the conclusion of being in a better state of being by the end. Nicely done per usual, I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those who get it, just get it. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words my friend.
xx
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![Profile picture of Sam Nash]()
Thank god he came … or we would all have been fucked … nicely done
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Sam thank you for reading! And yeah, or maybe it would have been enjoyable .. I guess we will never know now 😉 xx
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
You nailed this one. Well said & well received.
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Thank you Vision 🙂
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Mic Drop!
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Thank you Damian 🙂
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Love the picture and the word execution. Perfect
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![Profile picture of Broom]()
Thank you Fia 🙂
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreUnjust jealousyhas taken over meI cannot believethat you cannot seethat he is for me I will channel this rageas my pen flies across the pageThere is no smoke or sageThat will bless what is coming in spades You need to understandWhen...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Fia this is perfectly written and it’s true older women no more how to please a man I like an older man myself combined with a little arrogance great write ❤️
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🩷thank you crimsin
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![Profile picture of I_IS_ ME]()
Love the flow first. but also the attitude of claiming what’s yours. Tight
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Thank you Me 😉
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
This is honest, real and demanding. Well said Fia.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Vision;)
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![Profile picture of CasketSharpe]()
That flow and to the point understanding hit straight on
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
I love this one, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
This is raw possession and feral confidence on the page—jealousy sharpened into language instead of apology.
It’s confrontational without flinching, and the voice knows exactly how far to lean into menace before it becomes theater.-
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Thank you, Thomas
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I’m digging the attitude and confidence. Telling it like it is in your own sense of style.
Back off my man! This is fun to read and had a swag urban feel to it.
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Haha Thank you. I guess I was really feeling this piece
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That’s tellen her. When Fia lays down the law, watch out! lol Nice one. 🙂
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Well, thank you, Tim.
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![Profile picture of Wally]()
“There’s something that comes with age and time” there is something about this line that speaks with stoicism and control which also lets a little leeway to catch a case.
I loved the underlying theme, she may try tempt him but you have his heart.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
This is a subtle warning huh. LOL.
You make it seem “nice” because it rhymes. But so does “sharp” and “harp” -which is what they will be playing when you finish them off. LOL.
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Thank you, Styxian;)) Not so subtle I guess
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This is dark and reminds me of something that could be a thriller movie
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good morning beautiful Fia thank you graciously it is just some of the spirits I encounter from time to time ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write really pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian