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Read MoreYou have releasedthe Kraken.The mighty eye opens,thrusting to the swelling surface.I come for you in waves,fists strapped to the starboard bow.Your tentacles are drapedlike twisted sea dreadsswaying across your varnished shoulders.I am the captain’s daughter.You are the mutiny of...
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Thanks, girl! I like the ocean. I was a pirate in another life.
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You nailed it.
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I’m glad you think so, Thomas. Thank you!
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Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!
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LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?
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I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.
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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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Read MoreLead on,brave steed,up ambled stairs,this musky room,abrupt with noise.Let's climb until we find our chairsabove the sea of girls and boys.The very back... that's what I like.It's where we fuck on Friday night! Just take a seat beside me here.I'll...
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Poweful work and great rhyme. Excellent.
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Thank you so much, Thomas!
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Thanks, girl! I like to make my own entertainment when the lights go down!
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Read MoreSimplicity can produce brilliance Sometimes less is more Reconnecting through resilience Sure seemed easier before Drop the beat ride the bass line Rhythm is raging hard Ladies sipping on foreign wine Melody is her calling card Guitars solo over...
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Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight ink Have a great day!!
Bat
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well said, beautifully penned.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the groove comes through, that was my intent. I hadn’t read this one in a while but it still holds true. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You come up with fantastic imagery