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I wouldn’t, couldn’t resist your scenario.
Great sexy write and read 😘-
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thanks a lot Peter…
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A beautiful piece with some hot, sexual overtones. Well said dimpy. XXX
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thank you very much… 🙂 love your comment
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thank you very much… 🙂 love your comment
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The way it’s laid out,how can he deny you? Love this
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yes he can’t refuse…after all he is a hunky guy… thanks much fia for reading n commenting…
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Passionately penned, dimpy. This is one seductive write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you D… 🙂
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thank you so much A for encouraging me with your words…
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Ah, the sensual bliss of this poem, Dimpy! Love it! 😉
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thank you daniel… 🙂
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Sounds like a dream I had… 😉
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thank you for J FOR coming by…
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Read MoreShe is often described as wicked, all because, well she’s “different.” She’s fond of the nighttime and the color black, but it doesn’t mean she’s evil, cut the girl some slack. She looks unapproachable she wears a mean look on her face, like she would take...
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Cleverly penned, P.G. A beautiful write with a twist at the end, didn’t see that one coming. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m so glad you enjoyed Damian, I’ve gotta keep you on your toes somehow.
xx
~P.G💋
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If your the girl of my nightmares, I will gladly invite you in. YES!!! Wonderfully written. Marvelously executed. Passion running high. Great work P.G.xo
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Keith remember you are now a willing participant! Thanks so much my friend. I guess I’ll be seeing you in your nightmares soon.
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~P.G💋
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Tied up with the black belt of your poetry 🙌
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Poemstar, it is an honor. Thank you.
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There’s a delicious tension in the way you weave her confidence and raw into every line
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“Fuck being the girl of your dreams” wow! This sums it up. Well done!
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M.E it is always a pleasure to have you read my work. Thank you dear.
xx
~P.G💋
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Read MoreCarmyn Today is papa’s funeral, Nonna and Nonno have flown in from Staten Island and so have my aunts, uncles and cousins from all over New Jersey. It all feels wrong. It feels wrong to only see family when someone...
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Brilliantly penned, P.G. Incredible chapter my friend, you’re a natural storyteller. You sure this is your first time writing stories in this format? lol. Love the character development as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, it’s my first time ever going this far. Lol. I’ve written a few that got put on the back burner and were never finished, never published, never shared. So I started anew and this particular story has my heart, it just comes to me so effortlessly. I’m so glad you are enjoying, it means so much. Thank you my friend. xx
~P.G💋
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Your storytelling is phenomenal. A magical ride with great description for each character. Marvelous!!! xo
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Keith, you rock! I appreciate you and your kind words as always my friend. Just wait, it gets better.
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~P.G💋
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You go Camryn. Do not take that tone. lol
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Yeah she will not take that disrespect lol.. thank you Fia! xx
~P.G💋
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Read Moresadness dwells inside my sacrednessdeep beyond what people seemy soul connects to others differentlywe don't need to speakthe earth stretches and yawns with growing painspeople hurt I hurt with themMelancholy has gone silentand I with herdistress the faith shaken...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good evening dearest Damian thank you so much for the love on this write ❤️
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You know how much I adore your writing Brenda. This is no exception. Powerful, beautiful, wistful. Marvelous..xo
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thank you graciously dearest Keith ❤️
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the quiet voices of angels. Well done. ❤️
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hello dearest poet thank you graciously ❤️
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Read MoreA black clad leather demon claiming to be the lizard king Mr. Mojo Rising up on stage dancing in the summer rain Doors are infinitely open to perception as he starts to sing While young people bare witness to a world gone...
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I can read the morrison vibes in these verses. A well written Ode! “)
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, M.E. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Just revisited the Olive Stone film The Doors last week. It still holds up. Great! This poem is awesome Damian. The Doors were revolutionary for the few short years they were around. Killer poem.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yes, the late Val Kilmer, was able to capture the essence of Jim. He also sang all the concert footage in the film. They were revolutionary indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I really loved the ending dearest Damian yes powerful words and I love and still love Jim as I shake the cotton from my brain…great write and dedication ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you wholeheartedly, he was one of a kind. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You capture Jim very well here. Excellent work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Well thank you, I tried to capture him to the best of my ability. Appreciate you.
Damian
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There was just something about artist of that time that was just magical. Great tribute.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. There was something magical indeed. To quote Bob Seger: “Today’s music ain’t got no soul.” Appreciate you.
Damian
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This had the cadence of a song to it. His influence drifting through you, perhaps? What a great ode to your inspiration, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well I try, I have my moments. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Still lighting our fire ….
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That he is, the music of The Doors is timeless. Appreciate you.
Damian
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yup… thank you ❤