Nice write Fia.

I’m not sure if time even exists in the universe…..seems like a human construct.

Unfortunately some live in snow globes. Frozen in the same memories and misfortunes.
A well written, thought provoking poem, with a good concept. Well done, Fia! “)

Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
How have you done this, with almost each line/sentence a different perspective.
You always seem to surprise me and it looks like maybe it’s surprising you that you do.
What a lovely way to start a new week!
Love it to bits!
Warm greetings, Gus

To me, time as a gift. None of us knows, how long their lives will last. I think, it is most important to use the gift of time we receive to find out who we are, why we are here and how to live a life in harmony and at peace with ourselves and all of creation.
A well written and meaningful poem, dear Fia!

No idea

This is really good and there is nothing wrong with living on the edge.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like those two stanzas a lot as well. Always thankful for your continued support. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Those are some pretty terrific memories you listed, sometimes that world seems a million miles away, especially for those who lived it and try to keep it alive in our words. I always enjoy your commentary and your continued support my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Just trying something different. Appreciate you.

Damian

Dreams are casting doubt once again
It sometimes seems it’s so deliberate
Like a stiff jab landing across the chin

Fantastic, absolutely fantastic.

I walked through this one like the aisles of record stores, and frantically scribbling in my spiral bound notebooks, and trying to survive in a world full of so much that sorting it out became impossible…so we just chose live in the music and the words. The conversations that felt monumental then…come back today and feel even more incredibly relevant. But we hadn’t thought of them in years. Like the binding of time through word and thought. So hard to feel those moments in a time like now, when everything is fake news and nothing can be trusted. You took me on a journey here, my friend

Great vibe on this one, nostalgic but also fond of warm memories.
Nicely penned.

Old days without doubt are better, the world today is more fake and less human, and those with high empathy will suffer more, it’s alright to be who You are and to express your sadness and despair my friend. Take good care of yourself three too 🤍

Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)

I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.

I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..

All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.

Crimsin I enjoyed this piece and the picture is amazing.

thank you graciously dearest Styxian I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️

This is very beautiful. I want to read this constantly now. Thank you 🙂

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write with a spiritual vibe my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

“The onyx kingdom welcomes me” is lovely and profound. You have laced your words into a contemplative journey throughout this piece. Very nice.

This is cool. I relate to the nervous energy at times I just keep going.;))

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère C.,
A little rhyme replying your lovely poem:

This photo’s truly showing
What I always knowed*
Parking on the sidewalk is
How to define off road

So rope in a big wheel
and you’ll be certain of
One big wheel will be enough
If you want lasting love

Clumsy? Yes!
But so what!
There’s more than enough people who take themselves too seriously…

*Dion Dimucci’s past sense of knowing
Warm greetings, Gus