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Read MoreDaddy, come look!!Mommy pointed a gun at her face and fired it!She won't get upDaddy, she's funny looking, come look!
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Thanks Brenda! xoxo
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The relatives are coming. I relate…lol
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Thanks Fia. xo
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Sounds strangely… like my childhood… nice rattling write…
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WOW! That’s an intense childhood. Thanks for the comments LDF.
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Powerful and vivid.
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Appreciate that. Thanks!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Sounds like quite the quandary my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man.
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F* me! I hear a child’s voice reading it in my head. And BANG!
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You made my day M.E
Love the comment. Thanks!!
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) and
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damn. that fifth stanza hit hard. excellent write.
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thank you dearest poet most graciously it is honesty when I feel so down 💕
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Great penwork Brenda…
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thank you graciously lovely poet 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously also thank you for being here and being you 💕
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Heavy stuff. But I expect nothing less from you, Brenda
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hello dearest Naajir these admissions make me sad but it could be true thank you my friend most graciously 💕
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Razor sharp ink… Thank you for sharing.
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thank you graciously dearest Drieks 💕
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“It is with great sacrifice that I put myself away
pretending all is fine
My depression is deep
It drinks from the sunflowers
until even they fail to shine”You paint Van Gogh with the brush stroke of words 🌼
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what a beautiful comment thank you dearest Joe 💕
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You can take even melancholy and turn it into high art This has such exquisite emotional resonance for me as I read tonight. You have great talent my friend and it shines even through your dark clouds.
John
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thank you graciously dearest John that is a lovely thing to say 💕
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Read MoreNo spooning no forking No cutlery in bed No sweet cunnilingus No more giving head No doggies no cowboys No lube,no more toys No sounds like " I'm cumming" Life's greatest of joys. No moisture no heat No pounding of bits No pinching or biting No cock between tits No biting...
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That is so sad. Nothing at all.
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Noooooooooo
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I suspect that there are also many women, of a certain age,whose husbands aren’t interested in sex any more….but I ain’t one of them.
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Other peoples wives….lol
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You can say anything to me….
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And you my dear are a miracle.💋
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Love the Dr. Suess format. Fun piece, despite the sadness.
My mom once shared with me that she and my dad never lost their passion for each other and were still, er. active until shortly before he died at 84. I wish all couples could be that lucky.
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Love your rhyme!!!
But JFC I pray to never be this woman!! No nothing? At all? Ever? It’s quite miserable. :’( Great poem. xx
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Praying won’t stop the process of ageing and delusting.If that’s you in the picture then you have time on your hands sand plenty of praying time ahead of you.
May the force be with you.💋
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Peter, congrats on your hardware for this piece! It’s truly excellent and you are definitely deserving! The rhyme is brilliant. The meter is spectacular. The subject matter is disturbing, but that’s what poetry is about. Despite the depressing circumstances, you still manage a subtle tongue in cheek sort of literary smirk… capped off by this reference to silverware.
Brilliant
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Thanks DK for the lengthy comment….aren’t words magnificent.If only some of our leaders could use theirs more wisely.
😘
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Ah, Peter (and I choose that address on purpose, of course), folie a deux of the wurst kind (sorry, couldn’t resist), but terrible enough to be a winner, eh, P? A nice write. had me chuckling for sure. A nice job here.
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My day has started well by bringing a chuckle to yourself.
Whimsy and humour often make good poems….right?-
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and we need more of both 🙂
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hello dearest Keith I’ve missed your dark humor 💕