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    Wicked Storms

    Built a foundation on a fault line Temperamental bias stirs beneath  No substance flows from the vine Every shortcut is laced with grief   When the walls tumbled down It revealed a foolish arrogance  Under that smile lives a frown A string-puppet born to dance   Rain pours from...

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    • Happy Birthday cuz. This is one of those poems that make you feel…sad while telling you the truth.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the birthday wishes.. Appreciate you, cuz.

    • Happy birthday my dear pisces friend… a big hug!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the birthday day wishes. Actually, I’m a Triple Pisces.. A big hug back brother! Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • First, I hope you had a fantastic and soul-filling birthday. I have read this one 3 times now. I finish, sigh, scroll back up and read it again. It sinks into the mental marrow and stirs thoughts. You are a master of layers, my friend. I’m glad this one bubbled out of the “not yet” vault. It needed sunlight and shadows on its bones

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was a good birthday overall, played some piano, talked to J.J. Burton, and spent time with the wife and kids. Thank you for the b-day wishes. I definitely write in layers, probably because everything I observe has layers, including myself and humans in general. I come by it naturally I guess. lol. The “not yet” section has tons of writes in it, although some need work or at the very least a tweak or two. Always enjoy your commentary my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Congratulations Damian on finding these words & breathing fresh life into each one .. Oh’ and on your birthday too .. Neville 😎👍

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Thanks for the b-day wishes kind Sir. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Captivating and intriguing piece.

      You’ve got me hooked from the start. I was drawn to this by its title.

      Strong choice of words. Exquisite in its own way.

      A bold and daring read. x

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Rosie. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your amazing commentary and support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Damian this song on mortality and the grim reaper was one of your very best. The sheer lyrical strength was formidable here. I loved every roaring line. You really made this come alive for me. I am amazed.

      John

      • Thank so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m amazed after 35 summers of doing this writing thing I haven’t lost my love for the craft. I’ve had ups and downs sure, if I were to ever lose that love then I might have something to worry about. lol. Enjoyed your commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • “Built a foundation on a fault line” I think this is a just as good if not a more accurate description that old adage of built on quick sand, because with a fault line, at any minute of any day, a quake opens up and swallows things up quick.

      Great work here Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I lived through the era where it seems everyone was afraid of quicksand. lol. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

  • “I sure could use a vacation from this bullshit three ring circus sideshow of freaks.”

    Maynard James Keenan

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    The Other Is Asleep

    why am i here I ask? denied of a reply making money the only task taxed until the day i die   what is the meaning? in the simplest terms i keep on dreaming without significant returns   i’m not surprised to find that the world was rigged open doors in...

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    • It was hidden but it is nice that you found it to share again. “I’m not surprised to find the world rigged” is so true.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A very true line indeed, glad I found it too. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is kinda of bittersweet, but as you said it’s never too late to start. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, NTD. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That it is.. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorites verses as well, I can see how it does sound like voting. They are the only guarantee it seems, we’re even charged a fee to die. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • This is deep. Glad you found it and posted. And while you’re right the world seems rigged, I don’t so much think it’s the world itself, but the humans pulling the strings.

      Nicely written Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jackie. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That is a very valid point. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Such is the plight of us. Your words are a testament to that. At least you make a killer piece out of the dilemma.
      Excellent crafting Damian. Tight meter and rhymes are a plus too.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I do my best to make chicken salad out of… well you know. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Feels like a man staring down the rigged table and still sliding his last chip across just to see what happens.
      You’ve got the grit to ask the ugly questions most folks bury under Tuesday morning coffee.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Spot on commentary, I’m always asking the ugly questions, maybe it’s because I can’t do caffeine. lol. It makes my anxiety so manic it’s intolerable. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • when molehills become mountains they just have to be climbed or written about .. You just done good sir .. very good indeed .. you wrote about the whole thing .. Neville 😎👍

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I am one for details that’s for sure. It’s par for the course, just a step in the journey. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This took me back into the lines of Shakespeare about the stages of life but told in your original way with the rhythm and blues melody that really cast the spell as I read with the dark magic you infuse into your poetry so masterfully, my friend.

      John

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Now that’s stellar company to even come close to being in the vicinity of in a sentence with the mention of William Shakespeare. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • You’ve spill so many universal truths in this piece Damian. Once we realize a lot of things a lot of time has gone by.
      Excellent work sir.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Time waits for no one that’s for sure. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    “Time, spent wading off shore
    The calm, before the storm.”

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