Like a snake coiled & waiting. We can see it & hear the rattle. Deadly venom is bound to be lethal. Well expressed, my friend. I will sit in your kitchen & watch you cook anytime. Maybe toss you a few ingredients

hello dearest Damian the flow here and delivery are powerful as well as the content being impactful💕

Tremendous work. You nailed it.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. Glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I’d like to think we do. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yes.this is tender and erotic. Beautiful

Beautiful work, my friend.

Dear D,

I enjoyed the meter of this piece. It has just enough edge but lets the reader create their own scenario without all the graphics. Excellent write. H🌷

Tremendous imagery. You bring it to life.

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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you wholeheartedly. Appreciate you.

Damian

Awesome piece Damian.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian

D minor is like most minor chords a wee bit sad.I like diminished chords which kind of fit between sadness and happiness.

Good write dude.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. Glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve always liked D minor, Neil Young wrote quite a few. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is something different from what I have been reading here. I like it.

hello dearest Damian that refrain about not knowing whose real and being an opening for the headliner really struck my I could feel the emotion there this is powerful 💕

Tremendous work, my friend.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I can hold my own, and am always exposing truth. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write. Thank you for the compliment. Really means a lot to me. I love your take my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Nothing wrong with opening, you played that’s what matters. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cool piece Damian. Love the D minor chord.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian