Tremendous work.

I’m a sucker for awesome lyrics, and these hit like a radioactive hurricane! Heheh
Great tempo with lots of energy!
Loved it!

Damian, I love this rhythm and flow LOL Don’t turn your back on her indeed.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Those lines are 100% mine. They are hard to stay away from, that’s it in a nutshell. There are so many great musicians out there, some bands even have followings, though they never got a record deal. It wasn’t wasted music some people loved it, that is making it in a way. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Good to see you, and was also nice to get read some of your work again. Hope all is going well my brother. Appreciate you.

Damian

“she’s got eyes that mystify
makes you wanna take a chance
she’s the spider, yeah you’re the fly
caught up in a web of circumstance…”

I’m totally feeling those lines right there. I will say, I’ve known a few dudes like this…might have dated a couple. This is a killer song, my friend!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Unfortunately, I’m unable to talk about the song for a moment. But it will be resolved. Appreciate you.

Damian

Written from the heart. Thank you for sharing Damian.

When the passion is in the wrong place, nothing will ever reach the destination. I seriously with that album had come to fruition. I betcha one day he will too. Whether or not he ever acknowledges it…? What does one do when they realize they literally walked away from the talent? I would still love to have heard that album, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like the ring of, “True DeadLove Style.” Thank you, it takes an authentic person to recognize another. Right back at you! Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That is some twisted shit to do to a bandmate. Sorry, that happened to you brother. When we were in sync, we were a really good team. Before all the manipulative games began, people change, not always for the better. Music is a spiritual thing, I agree. Thanks for sharing part of your story, Tim. Appreciate you.

Damian

Nice rhythm love the joker in batman creation

Welcome to Gotham.

Why so serious? Lol 🃏
But seriously, this is very good, Damian.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s not really about the Joker, to be truthful. The first two lines are from an old song that was just a silly song that J.J. Burton and I penned the words to in like 1993. But I always liked the first two lines, so I just wrote something else to them. He mentioned the Joker because he was a fan, and I just used that to make the first two lines. lol. A little backstory for you, I always ramble on. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Damian I really liked this one I guess the joker would kind of be Lucifer always laughing at peoples pain really your poem rocks as they do anyway 💕

Fantastic work.

The first thought I have is a person or boss egging you on while you struggle.or just being smug. Laughing at your pain kinda thing.

Great ink, friend

As usual, I may be reading this wrong. But I’m feeling a sense of apathy is just as deadly as hate/evil. Those who don’t speak up for others, give their silence as a voice to the bullies. It definitely has my mind going, my friend

You keep hitting them out of the park. And I go flying with that ball every time! Gotta watch that hook…it’s a killer. Another thought provoking, rile-me-up piece, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Oh, technology has its flaws indeed. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love this, Damian. You are a man of honor.
I want to bookmark this, but it won’t let me.

Perfect reasons to do what you do. I love it. :))

damn. this hits.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m just me, but thank you for such a wonderful complement. Appreciate you.

Damian

Boom!

And this is why I read every word you share. Kindred. That’s all I got, my friend 🙌

Short and sweet but that’s not all .. I imagine also true .. Neville 😎👍