There’s a hole in the ceiling
That feeds this chill in the air
Getting hooked on a feeling
Slightly dizzy yet still aware
Dark figures sway in misery
Forced to watch them play
Chaos clouds our periphery
Calloused thoughts in decay
Shiny prize contains a hook
That’s how they pull you in
Crooked smile a crazy look
Waking up in the lion’s den
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
You keep hitting them out of the park. And I go flying with that ball every time! Gotta watch that hook…it’s a killer. Another thought provoking, rile-me-up piece, my friend
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I always swing for the fences! I am good at having that effect on you. Appreciate you.
Damian
This reminds me of social media’s control over youth. They can’t think for themselves anymore being they’re led and pulled in by algorhithms. Good one Damian.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Oh, technology has its flaws indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
This made me think of the negative thoughts you allow in, how they takeover. DON’T DO IT!
Solid write, Damian.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on. Appreciate you.
Damian
Right back at ya😊