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Read MoreFirst, there was a leafAnd it sailed on a streamSailed far away, as a paper boatFloating in my dreamsAs strangers by the sidewalkDrifting away, and astrayThere is no wayYou and I, hear each otherWith these silent poems, unsent lettersFlowers...
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Thank Fia Naturie! I appreciate it. “) <3
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Well f*** me. Damn! Yeah I’m with Fia on that one, what an introduction.. Being able to poetically inline subliminals while narrating a nightmare is quite impressive.
“The more I try to rein this tongue
I end up spilling more of its secrets”
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Who said anything about nightmares? Hehe
I wasn’t scared but I was confused and curious. And I used that confusion and curiousity and my own self-thoughts and struggles to make this poem. And I share it with you guy. LolWriting helps to think your things out, right?
Thank you, Malaya! Highly appreciated. “)
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Ooooh, I love how you end this. What a lovely couplet! Such powerful and disturbing imagery. I like the way you think. Can I ride your bus?
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“Take it with a kiss on the rim of a cup
And a grain of dirt upon a glass coffin.”The inspiration of these couple of verses was a picture that saw somewhere of a glass with lipstick print. And I got this call it epiphany or anything: life is temporarily and as beautiful/sexy as this picture. And the second image from a clip video. Snow white was in a glass coffin. And I thought of it as a momento mori image. You can see the grains of sand add up one by one till you are completely buried.
And this is the end of today’s bus tour. See you next time. Hehehe
Thank you for the love and comment! I appreciate it! And you are most welcome on the bus “)
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Very captivating dream you had. Seems it starts very calming with the paper boat as it transitions to a dark streak that compels in depth. If you dreamt this, then maybe look it up to see what it means. Mine are pretty vivid too and I just look up and it surprises what it’ll be. I loved this spill and very creative. Keep on writing to impress the beautiful minds M.E. ❤
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Actually there is two dreams (can’t call them nightmares.) The one in the bus and the second of the knife. I haven’t look up their meaning yet. I don’t know why. Thanks for reminding me. And thank you for reading and your sweet comment. “)
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Oh ok, yea o had strange double in one dreams like that. It’s confusing but neat too. Lots to write about lol.
Aww you welcome, I hope u can know the meaning of it M. E.
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Confusing dreams are the best material for poems. Hahaha.
Thanks again, Navina! “)
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Read MoreSkin on green grassLegs entwinedSubtly dissolve in the soil Roses among broken glassCoffins the size of buildingsAnd they face giants with petals Branches reaching for daffodilsWith their Sapphic thoughts, assorted by a fatal kissAnd their fetal love, and uteropoetic...
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Vivid and sharp.
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Thank you, Thomas W. Case! “)
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“Uteropoetic”… wow, I’ve never seen that before! Well, come to think of it, that speculum at the Gyn clinic looks like parentheses.
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Hahaha! I found the word. You found the image. I loved it. 😀
Thank you for reading and commenting “)
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uma summultima and
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Read MoreLooking for the right moment to feastWaiting for the perfect prey Little did I know, my hunger Got blinded by your twisted ways Satiated by your darkness And the musk and taste of your blood Did not realize the one...
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Powerful write, Jade. Fantastic spill my friend. Appreciate you.
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Thank you Damian⚘️
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Thank you so much! ⚘️
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Thank you Mari ⚘️
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Great write Jade…
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Read MoreOh that we could live in peace no lies,no greed,no one to fleece.Accepting of each others livesbut told to carry guns and knives.Our leaders stoke our primal fears,they strut and sneer to gain more cheers.And all the time the rich...
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Thanks for your reply…..the real problem with AI is it diminishes our ability to think but perhaps that’s not a bad thing.
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Mind-opening and thought-provoking poem. Well done, Peter!
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Thanks M.E…..everything I said is true but it’s not worth me getting angry about it.Doing so only gives the nasties a reason to gloat or worse, hunt me down.
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Wow, what an introduction to StarsRite. Nice spill Me;)) Welcome.