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Thank you! Happy to make you glow haha.
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Nicely done, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, thank you Damian. That really means a lot to me!
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No apologies necessary, girl. This is what writing is for. Your catharsis. Hand over your feelings. The piece is strong and moving.
Meg
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hello lovely Meg thank you graciously it is difficult because my feelings seem to confront me when I write there is no hiding from them… I deeply appreciate your understanding and willingness to listen my name is Brenda 💕
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hello dearest Will thank you for the good advise I want to get past this feeling in my life and in my writing…sometimes I think I here my son asking me ma, what are you doing when I am unkind to myself…still I am grateful I had time with my son to be close to him before he died… I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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Do whatever you need to do to survive…..write,cry,complain,run naked trough the streets if you have to…….just survive.
Take care and you have friends here that care even if from the other side of the earth.
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hello Peter good morning thank you for an understanding advise and a comment that made me smile 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. No apologies are needed, you grieve as long as you need to my friend. You’re working through your thoughts and emotions, writing is your therapy right now. I’m supportive because I also use my writing as therapy, I think it’s what writers do. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for being so supportive and understanding I appreciate you 💕
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I felt this.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you my friend 💕
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Hugely complex piece and I love the pic. I like how you use color to reflect emotion. Some great alliteration in this piece and the rare use of personification as well. It highlights the inner struggle as the body continues to persevere. Deep, tantalizing, thought provoking.
xoxo
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thank you graciously beautiful poetess I deeply appreciate your thoughts on the nuances of the poem 💕you made me smile and touched my heart…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment 💕
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Read MoreOn my last drunken escapade,I was sitting in my girlfriend'sliving room.It was 3:28 am, I was suckingon a cheap bottle of vodka, andIt was sucking the soul rightout of me.I knew things needed to change.She had just sucked me...
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hello dearest Thomas I wonder what has you sad your girlfriend or the drink and I’m curious what the bird symbolized…nice metaphoric write…💕
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Thank you Crimson. Both had me sad. Bird represents freedom and serenity.
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You know, when I drink Vodka, we’ve got dragons catching ravens. I just leave those motherfuckers alone.
Every poem tells a story, Thomas. I love it. But it does look like your girlfriend would have driven you.
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lol. Thank you. You are fantastic.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. I can definitely relate my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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Vodka is my demon drink but I just read yesterday that it’s good for your heart in moderation…
Translation: it’s always good to clean up from time to time. The drink will be there, you just have not be too.
Powerful confessional
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Oh wow, I like this! You picked a great beat for the lyrics. I’m like neon after listening to that!