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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read Moreall these dreams seem fadeddrowning in the silent seathe stars are all silver jadedloneliness will never set you freepassion burns beneath my hearti’m bringing down the fucking wallswithered thoughts are torn apartinside my mind the voice calls loaded weapon this...
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Superb work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Reminds me of a poem I wrote around the whole invasion of iraq. The poem is lost to me, but I remember some of the lines were.
“you can go ahead and die for your country
I value my life over everything
and if I’m gonna die
it’s not gonna be me wasted away
for a bunch of fucking creeps”This poem has fire and I love that.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Nice. What you remember of it. I had a lot more fire during this era of my life, I still have fire but I use it differently. At least that’s how it feels anyhow. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m gonna say I would love to throw a shoe at Joey G. If Adira doesn’t get him with her boot first. Ironically, I know a lot of musicians. All young & vibrant…& all in Nebraska. It would be amazing to see your words given the credit & voice they deserve. My partner wanted me to do songwriting for musicians but I shut it down because I “only write poetry.” 🤦♀️ I would write with you any day though. And I’m keeping my fingers crossed that your words are properly heard, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friends. Joey G, has that effect on people. I’ll keep your offer in mind my friend, I’m thinking about trying to use GarageBand to arrange the music, and I’m gonna sing the songs myself. But down the road anything’s possible. I’m curious to see what I can come up with now, that I’m sober. Always open to collaborating. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreG o l d e n W o r d sO’ that I were handsome,buff as I want to be,I’d sweep you off your feet …steal all your love for me.I’d be there beside you,listening to your woes,offering soft...
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That is beautiful. I do not see where you can improve on that.
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Hi, Fia! 🌸
How wonderful to hear your sweet voice this morning, sharing the loveliness of approval for this rather romantic little poem.
You truly are appreciated and enjoyed! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Ohhh, Adira,
You’ve taken a second bite’a my apple this morning 🍎
First, S i m p a t i c o … now, this!Welcome back, Dear Poetess À Moi 🌺
With such effulgent sentiments, it’s no wonder the bouquet of your utterances have left a hopeful bard yearning the gentle touch of your satin caress.Ahhh, that “she” were more truth than fiction, what succulently delightful splendor such a blessing would be.
Thank you, Lady Adira, ever-so warmly, for sharing your lovely presence and encouraging accolades!
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I’ve yet to see someone of your caliber when it comes to poetry, Richard. Your professionalism stands out.
A great offering my friend. 🙂-
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And, my very excellent, longtime friend, I thank you most gratefully for bestowing such a high caliber review upon this romantic little homage.
Gosh, Tim!
I must apologize for missing your inspiringly gracious review … but, I’ve quit receiving email notices from SR on reviews and messages, etc.I’ve always enjoyed whatever you share with me! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreIt's been locked away for so longYou're asking me to allow you the keyTo push open the door that's so strongLetting you see what can never beDo you hear the thud, thud, thudDo you know what it could beDo...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS wrote a new post
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Read More. . . S i m p a t i c o . . .It’s written, "Those who don’t care whywill never know what’s realnor find compatibility,but only to conceal."Conceal what’s true within their heartsthat share what others might,such peace of mind and sanitythat comes with great insight.Insight...
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Greetings, Adira 🥀
Thank you for your time taken to read and review this rather poignant piece in homage to a failed romance.
The verse you’ve selected to highlight (I think) is the core of this work … good eye and insight in understanding it’s significance.Your praise inspires me, too … hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Read MoreG i r l ⁓Flows slowly smooth, cool crystal rills,chaste wonders form a young girl's truth.Ripples flowing, sun’s spark’ling glints …pure innocence ~ sweet thoughts of youth.Softly satin, her innocence,through eyes that tenderness conveys;thoughts...
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This is sweet. You capture innocence seen on a young girl from a males pov. Enjoyed this
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Thank you sincerely, Fia 🌾
I’m so very pleased you found favor and enjoyment in this poetically masculine version of a few moments in a young girl’s blossoming.
Your words inspire me.
Hugs ‘n happy blessings! ⁓ Richard🍃
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. You wouldn’t be the first that felt that way, my own mother wanted to slap him upside the head a couple of times. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian