Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is really impressive dear Keith! We don’t know what the thereafter will bring. I think it is most important to listen to this little inner voice telling us what’s wrong or right. Therefore I try to speak and act in order to be helpful to others. I feel that this is the right thing to do..

This is stark and unapologetic. The poem commits fully to its worldview, and that honesty gives it weight.

Made me smile I love chocolate milk.

Beautifully penned, Keith. A nice ode to chocolate milk. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. The illusion of the happy family anyhow. Sadly it occurs daily. To quote Sammy Hagar: “(Little white lie) You got one, you got two.” Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliantly penned, PAR. There’s always depth and wisdom in your writes my friend. Nicely done as always brother. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love it, Paulo. It is such a strong, foreboding write. You don’t write fluffy bunnies stuff, you write blood and stone. I can always count on you to boost my blood pressure when I’m in a lull. Thank you for this one

hello dearest Damian I love the flow here and the content is so true I feel you on this ❤️

Well said my friend. A powerful message I can relate to.

i love this…the rhyming scheme…your words, impressively expresses the
compelling validity that stares us in our faces. an amazing write!
~ c

Dear D,

For me this was on fire. I kept thinking of close calls trying to stay in my lane at the same time of feeling lured into another. With just enough sliver of light to keep the full on pitch black from engulfing my soul. Intense write. Great piece. H🌷

I like how this moves through doubt and self-interrogation without rushing to answers. The questions feel earned, not rhetorical.

There’s a simultaneous sense of strength and uncertainty in this that drag at me. Like you know you made the right choice, but how close was it to the edge? That feeling I know all too well. If we’re not reviewing actions, we’re probably doomed to repeat them. Goes for individually as well as globally. Another layered one. Keep chasing thought, my friend. You always bring gold when you do

Love this! Skepticism is not paranoia, though gaslighters may disagree. Experience provides a roladex of patterned behaviors, and when there’s multiple red flags its no longer paranoia but an obvious truth.