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Read MorePerhaps once you were somebody smiling. Somebody in their youth, but even then, have you ever parted with your stone-cut stare? It haunts me to think of it after all these years. The earliest memory of you taking me to basketball...
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Well you know only recently have I found it necessary to write about my parents. Both contrasted with the other yet they were married thirty-seven years until my mother’s death. My father, I’ll keep venting about because it helps me get past many depressing things from childhood. Thanks for the comment as always, Paula.
Daniel
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. The flip side of the coin so to speak, compared to your mother in the previous write. You’re a gifted writer my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreOnce so stout and personality glowing, then so frail and wordless as your flame no longer flickered to the beat of your softening breath. My mother, I love you still! Always and forever until the day I see you again. Where...
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Very tender and loving, as it should be. You are fortunate to have her as inspiration. It has paid off well.
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Such a tender write my friend, amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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What color are your eyes? 🌼
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Hey, my eyes are light blue, if you wanna know! lol
Your write is wonderful. I do seem compelled by the easier nature of love poems/prose. This write fits that purpose. Well done.-
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Love poems save me from having to write about war, politics, and religion. And an added bonus is that I get to find out the most interesting things about people. 😂
Thanks for the read!
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Magical or contacts? Just wondering? 🌼
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Always layers in your writes my friend, this one does as well. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you yes it was hard leaving my house of twenty five years 💕
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As above, so below. As within, so without. Always you walk in the liminal light of esoteric thoughts. And always a pleasure to read 🌼
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Ur on to bigger better things fresh start where did u go y haven’t you called miss ur face friend
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hello beautiful Lora I miss you too I’ll call you tomorrow and thank you I hope I like it where I land 💕
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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hello dearest Thomas it is sad to leave a place you love after so long I will miss the garden thank you for your kind comment 💕
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Hello Brenda. Mesmerizing piece of melancholy poetry. I can feel your pain and sadness. Your heart will find happiness with your new surroundings. All in time. xo
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously for the love here it’s felt 💕
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Bravo.. Excellent presentation, Fia. Poetry will never die, with so many great writers keeping it alive. Besides, I’m not qualified to do anything else. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You know you are Damian. Thank you 🩷
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Informative piece. The presentation was done well.
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Thank you, Keith 🩷
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Great video. You have a very pleasant voice! ☺️
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Thank you so much 💓
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Poetry is like the moon. It never gets old.
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That is si true, Adagio🩷
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![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Very true! Like all forms of art…it evolves! Painting, music and POETRY! It desires a response. You may try to evoke one feeling and end up being perceived entirely different! You are great. Poetry will never die! Like love it will be in a multitude of forms.
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Thank you, Paula 🩷
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Very understandable. I have a love hate relationship with my late mother. I can never have her love or know why she couldn’t love me. I wish she would have been silent and stoic. I only knew my Dad the last year and a half of his life.
Relationships are hard. You take from them what you can – even if it’s a great lesson in how to be. I wish I had known that years ago. I became too much like her. Not abusive but her other bad habits.