She was the last of
safe spaces –
to
to everything in I
unrestrained sweetness
unrefrained tenderness
as I revisit this picturesque
night :
you cried below and
above me,
then poured your soul
into my mouth
turning us into
imperfect weightlessness
perfect
as I take you in my
dreams that
which is sometimes
loved more than life












Passionately penned, Eyes. Excellent write with nice wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you so much Damien, I’m so glad you enjoyed.
I appreciate you even more!
very much love your style! It’s special, personal, powerful and emotive. This speaks to me of unfair separation, there is big pain behind the lines that You only lead us to by glimpses. Great piece my friend 🤍
Translucently revealing, thank you sweetheart for your words. I’m so glad you felt my depths.
🤍🤍🤍
Chère E.,
Amen to that.
What a write! Love it a lot…
Warm regards, Gus
Thank you Gus!!! your presence is meaningful