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    Made

    Could you go on If you felt you couldn’t goOn..? Could you be strong if you could no longer be Strong..? Is this the point we reach. As the point of all this..? To be so fucked up You cannot get Up..? Observing the direction existence seems to be swerving for the deserving&Undeserving. I say I...

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    Don't Do It

    Death came quickly, I remember. But not quick enough.I suffered. Suicide is painful in so many ways,to myself, to others. And for those others,deep emotional pain followedand internal scars inflicted by my selfishness!By my self-pity!By my own choice! I say this, don't do...

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    Me first.

    I want to die before you so I won't miss your faults or risk loving them even more.   What a selfish man you married.  

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    • That is a selfish thought/ relatable. I know people who said they would want to leave before their spouse. Especially when they have been with them a long time.

    • I really like this. Sometimes I think about this sort of thing and some people just don’t get it. They think it’s weird or morbid. 😅

    • hello dearest Benny I want to die first because I know my husband will be fine with me and not so much me if he died first we all have our reasons I don’t think it selfish 💕

    • This is sweet, and I agree with Crimsin, not truly selfish. Ideally, Lovers should be able to die at exactly the same time.

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    Repainting Sessions

    1.So now, you seek a primer—after years of painting—Without enough sanding,Drowning in the paradox of colors.2.There is enough paint in here (my heart) to fill that emptiness.I opened it like Pandora’s box.3.Armed to the teeth with brushes and rollers,Stripped...

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    • Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
      It is not about painting, I agree. nice work

      • External inspiration, internal conversation. 50/50 hehehe. I was painting a wall at home and using the process to write.

        Thank you Fia! “)

    • Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.

    • Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3

    • This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.

    • Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)

    • This is deeply, thought-provoking.

      I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.

      It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.

      Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x

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    Chocolate Teapot

    What am I a chocolate teapot?An empty sentence without a dot?I melt when you say “hi”And bleed after a final goodbye.I never imagined you would leaveNot caring when my heart you deceive. I didn’t expect I was so useless. I didn’t...

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