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    Saving Grace

    I would walk through hell... And meet satan face to face... For you my son are my saving grace...

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    breathe

    insidious greed, the needful wayit is in us all to wantsomething tangible we can seebut on the aether breatheit is the spirit of lovethat is a sigh or an exhale awaybeginning with something as simple as a whispera piercing...

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    • Vivid and sharp.

    • Hoi hoi
      There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.

      And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
      Very nice write. Thank you!
      Kind regards, Gus

      • hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕

    • This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!

      Daniel

      • hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…

    • Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    If Only

    Only the deepest of feelings      Hammers striking the anvil sparks      Emotions which speak between two without words      Knowings      That razor thin line      Silent crossed      And then everything...

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    • If it doesn’t hurt, the love wasn’t real.

      Thank you, Mary 🌼

    • hello dearest Joe this is so passionately and painfully written I never stop loving and don’t get it when people say they do hugs 💕

      • I think the love of self sometimes overcomes the love for another. Someone stops putting into the relationship while the other tries in overdrive to save it. Most everyone has loved and lost at some time, even if the feelings remain..🌼

    • I think the love of self sometimes overcomes the love for another. Someone stops putting into the relationship while the other tries in overdrive to save it. Most everyone has loved and lost at some time, even if the feelings remain..🌼

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    Ruin

    I miss you But I will not let you ruin me.

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    Bleed To Breathe

    I let myself bleed to breathe. I write out what I need to… Allowing myself to be lacerated by the world's harsh judgments, however, as I bleed, I begin to breathe!   Ink bleeds out of my wounds onto the page, and I transcribe what...

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    • Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • hello dearest Danile this is fantastic always be yourself and I will to 💕

      • Brenda, your comment makes me want to ask you to write a piece yourself with the same title! I’m curious and I’m sure I would love what you would create!

        Daniel

        • it’s funny I wrote a poem called breathe after you and before I saw yours we are on the same wavelength 😊

    • Your writing goes under my skin. Intense as if it was really written with heart blood. Perfectly written, Daniel!

      • Vielen Dank, Elka! Fühlst du mein Schreiben unter deiner Haut? Das bedeutet, dass ich das erreicht habe, was ich mir hier gesetzt habe! You should see what I see behind my eyes so I can write like this! Hahaha!

        Tschüss!

        Daniel
        Gotisch-Surrealistisch

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