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    secrets of the abyss

    in the mediocre light I find myselfnothing stellar to speak ofdarkness gloom, I desire something specialto entertain divinitywithout losing my mind to the abysswhere oft times I wandermy soul adrifttouching on the etherealmy visions mine to keeppassion plays and...

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    • Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • The light only blinds and befuddles us, while darkness softly and thoroughly embraces our truth, regardless. There is indeed something special about nothingness -the void- where everything and nothing is possible.

      Superb write, my friend!

    • hello Mary thank you graciously lovely one 💕

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    Moonlit Candlelight

    Moonlit screams as they ripple the air from the grave of a girl. Moonlit corpse as she appears through a blanket of mist.   Moonlit ghost as in life, she’s lost, angry, whispers secrets.   Candlelit giggles as she’s in the flesh her glinting emerald eyes....

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    Cancer

    Cancer:That verminous dreg of death! A maulerwho sucker-punches, spars,and destroyswith body blowsits challenger's ghostly form. Even money—unable to go the distancewith all its supremacy—gets outwittedand KO'd. With undefeated form,Cancer prevails far too often. Life's referee of remaining daysstands over another challengerand vigorously counts...

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    • Superb work. Love the boxing metaphor.

    • hello dearest Tim I hope they find a cure I cry everytime I see a St Judes comercial kids battling cancer my condolences on your family member 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Tim. Into the book it belongs! The boxing metaphor is clever, people fighting for their life are very familiar with pugilist philosophy. Because it is indeed a fight, and some defy the odds for a while, because they possess a fighters heart. Excellent work, so sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Great write Tim and sorry for your loss.

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    sad girl

    a predisposition for depression swaymy feelings follow, and I was waylaidsuccumbing to the malady, I achesinister understanding, it would not alleviatethe darkness cloying devastateAnd in my compromised position, I vownot to placate people anymorethen swallow down my emotionsbecoming sorrowful...

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    • I suffered from it when I was younger for various reasons. Your poem spotlights it in an artistic way. Excellent poem crimsin.

      • hello dearest Tim I understand I suffer from it out of loneliness I can make friends I can’t keep them thank you for the lovely comment 💕

    • Powerful work. Tremendous.

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. I have had problems keeping friends as well, I can totally relate. Superb write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest damian I think my problem lies in the inability to properly set boundaries and when I finally stand up for myself it’s with anger and people are taken aback I think if I set consistent boundaries from the start it woud be better my problem is I see good in everybody thank you for understanding 💕

    • Hello Brenda. Magnificent piece of writing here. So many suffer with loneliness and depression. It’s not a good feeling at all. Stellar work my friend. xo

      • hello dearest Keith good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕

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