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Read MoreTHE TASTE OF SYNONYM The odor of stale beer danced with the steel blue smoke, while Ska beats filled the air with electricity. As the room filled, a thousand words spoke all at once, loudly, making it seem like a small riot. Amidst the noise of confusion and polemical...
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Frolic away, my friend! I am glad you enjoyed the read, Styxian, it is always good to see you on one of my poems.
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Hi ValuptasUnholyWhisper!!! If that is you in the avatar (photo), it is nice to see your smiling face, and welcome to my poetic garden. And it is my pleasure to have “captivated” you.
perhaps you might also like Deep Forest, and Enya? These are some of my “trippy” musical treats from the 90’s. I’m listening to Enya’s “Watermark” as I type this reply.
Anyway, I love when you visit, thank you for time and words.
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The places this one took me…You held this one on the crest of wave after wave of poetic brilliance. It was the faded tight jeans that locked me in and kept me rolling with it
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Hi Willow! This poem, its internal mix of emotion is one of the poems I am most proud of. While it is a play on words, it is also the way “faded jeans and flannel shirt”, makes it more real, more conversational. I am glad you noticed this and more that you got hooked by it and brought you deeper into the poem. Thank you!
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Read MoreI JUST LOSE CONTROL (It amazes me. Take a song from a long time ago, add a conversation with a close friend, and kiss your Muse. Here is what happens.) “ooh ooh baby when you’re near me, I just lose control. I feel the earth...
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so very lovely and refreshingly romantic ❤️
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Crimsin! So nice of you to visit and leave me such wonderful words on this poem. I hope you don’t mind, I sent you a friends request and will visit your page to read some of your works.
Thanks again.
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thank you sounds great 😊
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Mary, Mary, HI and Hello and I am out of control seeing that you are here, leaving me an “amazing”. Okay Curt, calm down, behave, it’s your friend Mary. Stay in control, she likes your poem, everything is okay! Hi Mary, this is the “nice” redzone. I come once in a while cause Curt is excitable, especially when Valuptas is visiting and “whispers” at one of his poems. If his excitement bothers you, just bop him upside his head. 🌹
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WHEEEE, redzone is excited and dancing around… UPSIDE DOWN!!!! er.. ;0)
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Read MoreNo Diggity (revolution is real and will be televised) Damn girl, work it with them beats moving your sway and the jazz is sweet. The beat drops into California rockin’, Tupac lays down the rifs; west coast east coast, shakin’, shakin’, there’s an uprisin’ in the clubs tonight. Damn people, rockin’ east coast west coast worldwide...
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I know, I know. I need to do this, make an audio. I’m kind of scared it will sound like shit. Maybe I should do an AI version. And Canva is a good app to use for this?!
Thanks Mary.
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I can feel the movement in this! It’s got some heat on the burner!
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Hey there Willow, so happy you felt the “movement”. I just let the pen go, it was rockin’ rockin’.
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Read MoreI have a therapist.She's been withme since birth.Watercolors on mysoul.She spills black, andblue; sometimesred.Blood is tobright on the whitepage.I blush for theboth of us.When all is out forthe caged moments,I collapse and rest.I dream in metaphors,and I taste thesweetness...
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Hey I think you might well have cracked it Thomas .. You may be able to break an egg but you can’t beat a symbiotic bond now can ya squire .. This is smashing and has your literary DNA running right through it .. Neville 👍😎👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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Stimulating, intriguing, well said and creative. Great!
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Thank you.
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The pic drew us in but we read this twice and this right here , “obscure memories of
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Much appreciated.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend, you hit this one out of the park. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Thank you so much.
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The irreplaceable mistress. What would we do without her? I hit “tangerines and treehouses” and actually squealed! Brilliantly written, Thomas.
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You are the best. Thanks.
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Very clever, for starters. And you carried the story theme along so well. It’s a read for creative thinkers who wanna frolic. LOL
It isn’t so trippy that I couldn’t stay with it. Great write.