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I admire the ease with which you express your inner world. Stoic, melancholy, honest and beautiful write. You are there in every word, thank you for the share!
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Read MoreI am on fucking firefrom the top of my head to the bottom of my feetThe fire started from withinBlood drips from every openingSizzling the moment, it hits outer skinI want to cryBut I can notI screamed so loudyou...
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Great write Fia.
I think we’d agree we aren’t our bodies.
Somewhere in the spaces between our cells , our atoms, is our consciousness…but that’s not us either.
We cling to our notion of self but really are non self.Nothing.-
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Thank you, Peter that is a profound statement. I believe we are more.
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Phenomenally penned, Fia. This was a powerful write my friend, I think our soul is our mind. It makes sense to me anyways. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That is definitely a thought. Thank you Damian
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The Heart & Soul is everything to a person’s existence. The brain is just there to put it into words. Great piece Fia. xo
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Read MoreDon and I have become friends.and we make quite the odd pair.Just an unruly girl and a bottle;Drinking myself silly,the way I cling to himyou’d think it’s an affair. Don only gets the worst of me but he makes...
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I hope you didn’t drink the entire bottle.
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Never.. it can get quite pricey.
xx
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Beautifully penned, P.G. Love the flow and wordplay my friend. Used to like Tequila, even better was Mezcal. Of course those days are long gone, I wasn’t able to do moderation very well. Anyways a great write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool piece P.G..Creative. Just don’t overdo it with the hard stuff! And I don’t mean Don’s member!! xxxo
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There is so much to unpack here: the not-quite-healthy relationship that just feels so good, too good. The conflicting knowledge that you seem all too aware of: /My head is telling me to drink more, my liver screams “GET IT TOGETHER!”/ Been there, done that too many times. Vodka was my liquor of choice, and Stoli was my dear friend (along with Camels) for a good while many years ago. The fact that the knowledge is there speaks volumes to you as a person. Excellent write! <3 Echo
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KristinaX and
RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS are now friends
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Read More“Too much sanity may be madness and the maddest of all,to see life as it is and not as it should be.”CervantesIf asked to tell of loveI could tell nothingFor I am a foolBut without foolsLove would cease to...
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Really seems to be a struggle to get the formatting to stay the same. Strike two. 😠
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Lol, take two, and take three to get the picture aligned. I make simple things hard. Its a gift.
But more importantly, thank you for your sweet compliment. Fools are getting rarer but players are out there in record numbers. Nice to meet another of the vanishing breed. 🌼
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I swear to all things fuzzy, if I could get that bookmark function to work, this would be well & truly bookmarked! Amen & pass the bottle! Beautiful…
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And what a functionally challenged group we are! But I’ll take word for deed, and kindly hand you the flask. Thank you, dear Willow 🌼
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Thanks reading and sharing your thoughts. Its true, “Those that have it at any level are lucky and blessed.”
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Introspective write, Daniel. Very powerful spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian