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    I could be a better boyfriend

     The bed thumps rhythmically beneath you while youmake a grocery listand notice the weirdwater stain by the edge of the ceiling fanthe pace increases soyou stifle a half-assed moan and tilt your pelvis and wonderis thisis this…and you wait...

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    • Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author

    • Betty love your writes. Wooo

    • Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight

      • Hey ME!
        It is tight as hell, my friend! (Kegals doncha know.)
        Thanks my friend. Good to see you.

    • What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!

      “forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
      Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
      The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
      Good to see you donating to the site. It’s about time!

      • My sweet, innocent brother-from-another-mother.
        No, this was just some older stuff dusted off.
        I have yet to write the porn.
        It’s gonna be like a Gallagher show, you’ll need visqueen sheeting to avoid the splash zone.
        JUST KIDDING…
        Maybe

        Hey, bro, thanks. I fucking adore you. Your critique matters and I really appreciate you for it. Thank you for being a fucking icon.

    • Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
      Okay okay.
      You are a premium writer, Betty. Any site goes up in value with you posting in it. It isn’t always about the subject matter. It’s the technique and ability of the writer that carries the weight. You are gold.

    • Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
      Nice work Betty.

    • LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!

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    Chasing a butterfly

    I checked the clockIt was past midnightTwo hours had passed without me realising itAnd an hour weighs ten hours thesegrim daysA fleeting happy momentSomething you want to catchLike butteflies with blue armsWhen you are a childYou gave it to...

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    Twisted Pleasures (Ancient Oz Series)

                 “Looking into the crystal ball moans escaped her red lipsAs the Wizard pulled pigtails and stretched insides with long dick,            “The dark secret of Oz made her wish she was back homeBecause her...

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    Denying Proof

    Cruel creatures deputized to enforce hate Disappearing our neighbors in plain sight Cities turned into an occupied police state Random acts of violence stir day and night   Living in this bubble realizing soon it’ll pop Nobody's untouchable when it matters most Chaos keeps spinning madness...

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    • The Basic Law states that human dignity in inviolable. But dignity, physical and mental health have long since become the playball of abuse of power and corruption. Very well expressed. Powerful writing dear Damian!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you 100%, you hit the nail on the head. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I hate corruption. Seems that it’s becoming more obvious with no one taking charge. Awesome piece dude!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s the only thing besides hate and cruelty that they are transparent about. Appreciate you, brother.

        Damian

    • When reality warps, the shapeshifters ascend as keepers of the shifting veil.
      Only those who guard the ancient flame of truth withstand the empire of forgetting.
      Great words Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Nice commentary brother, you’re a wordsmith. Love it! Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A terrific summary of mankind’s terrifying – and worsening – predicament. Excellent Damian. Harriet-Jacqui xx

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, HJ. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Wish it wasn’t the case, but unfortunately it’s quite terrifying indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Damian this poem brings light to everything that is going on. Really good cuz.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try my best. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • This reads like a warning flare shot straight into the dark.
      The anger is focused, and the clarity makes it hit harder.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s what I was going for brother. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I literally sat on my hands for a minute so I didn’t launch into immediate rant. The whole purpose of their actions is multifold, I think. First and foremost, create fear and stir up animosity and hatred. Second, fill their privately owned concentration camps for free labor. And third, though definitely not least, continue the trafficking started by the big name these days. These people need to be stopped, prosecuted and locked away forever. Powerful, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m 100% on board with that assessment. Their actions are definitely multifold I agree. I seen something on project 2026, it pretty much picks up where 2025 left off. It even had floor plans for the concentration camps, they’re trying to build the 4th Reich in my opinion. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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