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Read MoreMirrored faces reflect faces mirrored.The mirror can break,appear as impassible spindles of web,and sometimes it can shattermy only doorway to my utopian psychosis. The voice that emerged I didn't recognizeit was holding conversations outside of meto a being, I...
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Brenda, you have this talent to bring us into that headspace of hurt and longing. Nicely done
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hello lovely Fia sadly this is kind of true story…I deeply appreciate your thoughts and thank you graciously 💕
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Superb work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
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As always Brenda, you’re an amazing, very diverse writer. You could do anything. xo
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thank you graciously dearest Keith 💕
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Powerful write, Brenda. Great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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Read MoreMy thoughts worry I don't feel good todayMy nerves are on edge, and my soul feels rankledIt's a beautiful sunny day, and I can't get in tuneIt just makes my foul mood stark in comparisonAlcatraz, except my prison is...
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Love this. Trees speak to my spirit as well. A reliable grounding force.
I dug this vibe thru and thru. Thx for posting, Brenda
It’s a good start for an ordinary Tuesday-
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hello dearest Naajir thank you for feeling me on this write yes trees with their stoic knowledge calm I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas I appreciate your thoughts 💕
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Nature helps so much more with our issues then medicine or people trying to figure out our problems. I’ll see you in the woods my friend. Love this poem. xo
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thank you graciously dearest Keith I love nature 💕
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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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No. She picks them out herself. He does watch. He sits in a corner and envy’s all the men that fuck her. But she don’t care. Mr. Woody can’t even get off without being in excruciating pain. Mr. Woody is more like Mr. Softy. No not the ice cream truck!
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Filled with dark humor and gritty horror. You write this style with imagination and a flair for the dark arts of poetry.
John
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This style comes out very naturally for me. I was always into satire, horror and black comedy as a kid. Thanks John.
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The fucking irony my friend. Cleverly penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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Interesting piece. Gives you sense of nowhere to turn.