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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 9 months ago

Piano Mistress

Poetry

September 23, 2025

12

How can I competeShe had trained you for her desiresShe tells you to count before you beginYou take deep breaths, trembling You either fear heror you desire her Lust or disgustRides you hard She tells you she wants you to play something...

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12 Comments
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  9 months ago
  
  I love this piece. You create an excellent and interesting metaphor and you carry it through from beginning to end.
  It really works and we feel the relationship between the poem’s subject and the piano.
  nicely done, Fia.
  j.
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months ago
    
    Thank you, Jacob ;))
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  9 months ago
  
  Fia….I thought it was more about a femdom sorta thing….still good either way.👍
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months ago
    
    Haha..well you never know when I could pop a poem like that out. Thank you, Peter;))
- Neville
  9 months ago
  
  I just can’t imagine any hot blooded music loving fella NOT enjoying this & DEEPLY .. Bravo Mistress F .. Neville 😎👍
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months ago
    
    Thank you, Neville.(big smile here);))
- twofiftythree
  9 months ago
  
  excellent write
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months ago
    
    Thank you, twoffthythree ;))
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Music is a seductive lady, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Damian;)) Music is exactly that,
- goldenmyst
  8 months ago
  
  Fia this was smoking. I love piano music and this is one of the most creative poems on seduction of a pianist I have read. I felt the flame of his helplessness because her womanly powers. Sizzling.
  
  John
  - Fia Naturie
    8 months ago
    
    Thank you, John;))
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• 9 months ago

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Crimsin wrote a new post

• 9 months ago

angel

Poetry, Spirituality, Uncategorized

September 23, 2025

3

over come with sorrowthen I see this sweet little facesinging don't worry about a thingcause every little thing is going to be alrighttears came and my heart swellat four years old this angel sang to melooking so much like...

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3 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  9 months ago
  
  crimson, this is sweet. I understand how you feel
  - Crimsin
    9 months ago
    
    hello beautiful Fia he made me smile so I thought I would share it thank you❤
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Brenda. They’re amazing like that, a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 9 months ago

The Great Deceiver

Poetry

September 21, 2025

19

Fueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see Face...

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19 Comments
- Atticus Abbey
  9 months ago
  
  Great!
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Fia Naturie
  9 months ago
  
  This is really good. Damian <3
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  9 months ago
  
  Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  9 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Superb.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  9 months ago
  
  Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- RomaJ
  9 months ago
  
  I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.
  
  The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  8 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  8 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  7 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍
  - Damian DeadLove
    7 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
    - Neville
      7 months, 2 weeks ago
      
      My pleasure entirely .. 👍
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 9 months ago

seduce

Poetry, Spirituality, Uncategorized

September 20, 2025

10

there is a code of flameeach spark and tendrillicking the airspreading the heata sacredness of smokeas it rises all the way to the heavensa magic in fireit can warm or burna destructive forcea beautiful transforming desireit licks at the...

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10 Comments
- RPM
  9 months ago
  
  Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!
  - Crimsin
    9 months ago
    
    thank you graciously ❤️
- Atticus Abbey
  9 months ago
  
  Fantastic!
  - Crimsin
    9 months ago
    
    thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
- Fia Naturie
  9 months ago
  
  You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.
  - Crimsin
    9 months ago
    
    thank you beautiful ❤️
- Thomas W. Case
  9 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Superb.
  - Crimsin
    9 months ago
    
    thank you dearest Thomas ❤️
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months ago
  
  Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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