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Kinda switching it up a little, testing other avenues on this site. Thanks Lady
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Read MoreMy little goth doll All ashen dressed in black Not trying to change I like her like that The planks of our heart creak with every beat Our conscience escapes with unseen feet Wolves are howling up in the hills...
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Oh man, this is poetry that is like a worship of the person and a telling of how much they mean to you, Nice
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This is bowing to a Lady that truly earned it once in our life, Thanks Lady
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Read MoreListening to those old songs again They speak of pain and past regret A familiar voice wears a bitter grin Hard living arrives at endless debt Bending words to avoid all feeling Can’t outrun those distant screams Strange spirts often make a killing Pillaging through discarded...
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“A familiar voice wears a bitter grin”
I can clearly understand your excellently expressed words, dear Damian. Such songs can trigger an endless loop of depressing thoughts. But they hold also the potential to make us aware of the shadows in our soul and help us to heal them.-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I too, like that line. You are correct in your assessment, in this instance this one leans towards the latter. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is free flowing thought is deep. It is amazing what the mind will produce at any given time.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is amazing and can sometimes depend on the effect of the jellybeans. lol. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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There’s nothing worse than past regrets. If we could only get it right the first time it would alleviate so much. But life doesn’t allow it. Sad but true. Good one, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It would save a bunch of heartache to get it right the first time but life kinda gets in the way sometimes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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damn it dearest Damian this is great ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ll take that as an overwhelming seal of approval, and I thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Great rhymes, awesome message. Well done my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I have my moments here and there. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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” Listening to those old songs again
They speak of pain and past regret”
Yeahhh. I get this. The older I get the more I resonate with
those Truth Tellers of the pastThorough work, Damian
much respect
Naaj
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Truth tellers of the past often inspire new truth tellers. That’s just my opinion though. Much respect to you sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This hits with the weight of memory that refuses to soften, each line carrying its own ache. I love how the poem lets the past speak plainly—no sugar, just the raw residue of living.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support brother, really means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh the layers in this one. It’s interesting how old songs can take us back to a moment and it’s fresh again, but we’re able to look at it through the eyes of hindsight. That’s where regret comes into play. Without hindsight, we don’t know there’s anything to regret. I sit with old tunes sometimes just to remind myself where I am, because of where I’ve been. And then I change the music and carry on. It’s all we can do. But those old ones… Feeling this one, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Music definitely can take you back in time and without hindsight I agree there would be no regret. Great job deciphering the layers. It also adds more layers when I helped write and arrange some of those old tunes. Some guy once said: “Music is the soundtrack of our lives.” He might be on to something. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate your support ❤️
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Chère C.,
When the Words of the painting get rough for a non native speaker,
The beautiful artwork help me along….Love it to bits, needless to say!
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thank you dearest Gus thank you for commenting and supporting me ❤️
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A stellar write from a wonderful poet.
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thank you graciously dearest Keith ❤️
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Read MoreAdvertising temptationA credit possession driven nationSo determined, so obsessedWith having only the bestSwipe away what isn’t yoursTo compare and competeTake out another loanBeg, borrow, steal Fancy car, you’re in debtHouse on show, not your assetImmaterial, materialDeath by debtBlinded by greedTermination...
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hi dearest Keith this is so true my daughter followed in my footsteps of shopping when she feel sad excellent write ❤️
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So many use shopping when feeling low. That could become quite tragic and very expensive. Make sure your daughter doesn’t fall into a viscous cycle with her spending. Thanks Brenda!! xox
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with amazing wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed Damian.
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A wonderful, perfectly written piece of social criticism, dear Keith! Too many people appreciate material wealth only, lacking emotional intelligence, compassion and respect for all living beings. A powerful message! xox
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Yes they do. Spending on foolish items can become a real problem. Many buy on impulse and enjoy that quick rush. When reality sets in, they feel miserable and defeated. The cycle starts all over again. Thanks Elke..xo
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This hits like a cold slap, unflinching in its portrait of obsession and debt. I love how it mixes social critique with a personal edge—you can feel the shame, the watching eyes, and the inevitability of it all.
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Awesome feedback here Thomas. Thank you!
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This is definitely a Friday night kinda vibe. It’s getting hot in here. Need some cold water.