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Sisyphean Tasks wrote a new post
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You are ALWAYS so, so kind!!! And, now, when I finally have my meds updated, I RUSH to go read your poems I’ve had on the back-burner until I can appreciate them and comment the best, and HP is DOWN for everyone, and with a very ominous message, one that is usually reserved for when a website’s core files have all been deleted, soooo, did Eliot really pull the plug with no notice, as he said he would if the experiment of two months to see if it could make enough money to pay the bills or not was completely? Well, the two months ended to the very day and now the website is gone… I don’t think he was joking around!! Lol. But we have here, but I don’t have your poems you recommended, that short list, to read, and I REALLY want to read them, and comment really fully on them, the size of a critique but much nicer, saying only the good things!! So if you have the here, or can share them here as well, that would be AWESOME!!! But in the meantime, I have two that came to me in my dreams last night to post, so that’s a good thing for me at least. I hope you have all your HP poems backed up, just in case… or to do so if the site comes back up, because I’ve a feeling the day the site NEVER comes back up is a comin’!!!
And thank you again, I love your comments, they always feel so sincere, and “with a tender touch”, I could not have asked for anything more than that in writing of my late mom, thank you m8. Her granddaughter, Angelika-Darlene, wore L’air du temps as well, only on really special occasions as being a nun she didn’t want to be extravagant or an Égoïste, as if she ever could have been with her humble heart, so this was for her as well (PLUS her mama, Monika, wore L’air du temps as well because she smelled it on my mama, loved it, and my mom gave her a BIG Nina Ricci biggest-bottle you could get of L’air du temps that Christmas of 1988 as Kiki’s first Christmas present from anyone in Canada, even opening it before my gift to her. Oh, what memories poetry can bring back to us, huh/?!?
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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It was hidden but it is nice that you found it to share again. “I’m not surprised to find the world rigged” is so true.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorites verses as well, I can see how it does sound like voting. They are the only guarantee it seems, we’re even charged a fee to die. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is deep. Glad you found it and posted. And while you’re right the world seems rigged, I don’t so much think it’s the world itself, but the humans pulling the strings.
Nicely written Damian
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Such is the plight of us. Your words are a testament to that. At least you make a killer piece out of the dilemma.
Excellent crafting Damian. Tight meter and rhymes are a plus too. -
Feels like a man staring down the rigged table and still sliding his last chip across just to see what happens.
You’ve got the grit to ask the ugly questions most folks bury under Tuesday morning coffee. -
when molehills become mountains they just have to be climbed or written about .. You just done good sir .. very good indeed .. you wrote about the whole thing .. Neville 😎👍
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This took me back into the lines of Shakespeare about the stages of life but told in your original way with the rhythm and blues melody that really cast the spell as I read with the dark magic you infuse into your poetry so masterfully, my friend.
John
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I agree with Damian It is a beautiful tribute.