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hello dearest John thank you he was a part my heart and he was so young to go he will be missed 💕
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What a beautifully expressed tribute, Brenda
Much respect
Naaj
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hello dearest Naajir you would have liked him I believe he was a lot of fun thank you for the love 💕
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I feel this one in my bones…As a mom, I know dam well that no amount of writing can take away the pain…Having that said, this is beautifully written and it gives hope that while appart, you are still connected…
Jade xox-
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hello beautiful Jade thank you for the love here no writing is a help but I fear the emotions that keep rising 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely tribute my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for the love 💕 it’s appreciated…
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Write it out, Brenda. You honor him with your love. Write it out ❤️
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hello beautiful Willow thank you for the love I feel like he doesn’t want me to be sad and I want to write and I did today but I know no matter what write the sadness is going to come forth I deeply appreciate you 💕
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hello dearest Keith thank you for the love here it’s felt 💕
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We all are connected to those who leave us in death.
I still feel my father on my shoulder when I need guidance and my mom was right about everything. Both gone, but live in my heart.Your son will always be with you.
He had a beautiful smile.Condolences and remembrances Brenda
I feel you
🖤💙💓🤠
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hello dearest Poet good morning I think so too that we are connected I can hear him talking to me and I feel him close he is on to a new life but doesn’t want me to be sad thank you for the love here 💕
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Read MoreCaller: “Hello?” 119 Operator: “Hello! Happy holidays and thank you for choosing Butterball Turkey! What’s your emergency?” Caller: “Why would you think there’s an emergency?” Operator: “It’s Christmas Eve, sir. Why else would you be calling a turkey company?” Caller: “Well, you’re so...
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You’re one hell of a writer, DK. Brilliantly penned, the dialogue was incredible, enjoyed your witty sense of humor. And of course the temperature rising seductive elements are incredible my friend. Fantastic spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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LOL! Thank you, Damian! You feel like a cook to me. I bet you’ve got some amazing culinary experiences.
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Tremendous. Creative beyond words. Excellent.
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Thank you so much, Thomas. You and I need to exchange some recipes. I’ll let you lick the spoon.
xoxo
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It took you 20 minutes to read this? What exactly were you doing, Keith? Yes, I want details. Stop blushing and spill it. Okay, I used to be governor of South Dakota, but I had to get out of there. My nipples nearly froze off. So, I moved to Mississippi. It’s hot as a turkey in the oven down here.
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lol. Yes.
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This is a riot of erotic and humorous story telling. You have the gift with the dialogue that got my mercury rising indeed. Truly a fabulously naughty romp from kitchen to delivery room. Wildly wonderful. From cranberry to bottom this took me there and then some.
John
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Awe, thank you, Golden! I LOVE your comments! Thanks for reading my stories.
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Thank you, HJ! Thanks for coming to dinner!
xoxo
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No, you won’t. Your mouth will be full.
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Kept me reading from pure curiosity. The rump didn’t disappoint though haha. Great ink.
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Just from curiosity? LOL
I’m glad it didn’t disappoint. Thanks!xoxo
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Yeah, all this to invite you to Thanksgiving!
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Only if I can lick your cranberry…
xoxo
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Read MoreAWAKEAbandoned hesitationEarly morning copulationI dig my nails into the sheets The mattress squeaksYou stretch my coreas undulations reach their peakand leave me begging you for moreMy bra and panties on the floorplay hide and seekbeyond the dooras if they've seen...
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It’s haunting and intoxicating.
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I’m glad you think so, Poe!
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This poem has both great depth of emotion about the man whose wife gazes on in the form of a picture and the sizzling sensual story. Truly a masterwork of erotic poetry. You have a fantastic ability to convey the feelings and scene letting me see it as though I were sitting in a corner watching.
John
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Wow, John… that is such an awesome comment! I’m so glad you stopped by to look at this piece and tell me what you think… and make my head swell. Thanks so much! I hope you keep liking my stuff and sitting in my corner watching. I’m all about erotica.
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Intense write, DK. A lot of depth underneath this steamy write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m so glad you caught that, Damian. This was meant to be like a chocolate Sunday… both hot and cold.
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This brings back some memories.
Especially the stained sheets and after sex mood swings.
Diggin this vibe for sureNaaj
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Naaj, you totally get me. I apologize for women everywhere when it comes to mood swings and sex, but it just happens. Probably a good reason to get drunk off your ass before you fuck. By the look of you, I’d say you could make me woozy without a drop of alcohol.
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You got that right, Keith. The hottest sex I ever had was with a baseball player who nailed me in my rental during college. My boyfriend walked in on us and just watched the whole thing. SHIT! So, I experienced getting caught and getting fucked at the same time.
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Meg, this is short but so potent. So straight to the steamy action. And yes alot of depth. You’d make me climax just as quick as this read I must say, I wouldn’t stand a chance holding out! Hehe! 😉
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Let’s hope not. I don’t want you launching that quickly!
I’m glad you like the poem, though!xoxo
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Read MoreYou know, back in the day I love me some young men I was willowy, I was spring, Damn I was May I was down to trying every position conceivable Hormones were rampant The body and spirit were ready, willing, and able As work starts...
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Love the sheer erotic narrative here that draws me in and makes me want to stay until the very end. Truly a hot poem that inspired bedroom thoughts and feelings. I could feel this deep down where the sun doesn’t shine.
John
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Thank you, John. As long as you feel it deep down, then I did it right. lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. You always make the temperature hotter with your writes my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I try to raise the heat when I can. ;))
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” They start with that whisper that hits behind the ear
A practiced tone
That causes goose bumps and raises those baby hairs ”
Yeahhh…this paints a pic of some nice memories.
Nicely written
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj😊
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I’ve always been accused of being a grown man… now you know why… this was a great story.. perfectly done…love it.
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Thank you, Sam., You do the whisper thing? Nice;))
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Read MoreHave you ever made love to a poet?I am creative in more ways than one.I can find poetry in the locks of your hair,and recite them in your ear as you come undone.I taste the words on your lips...
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Passionate rough writing. Well done.
Breathless. ❤️-
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Poemstar, I thank you for reading!! Always a pleasure.
xx
~P.G💋
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Passionately penned, P.G. Seductively beautiful this write is my friend. Clever wordplay as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I thank you for reading and for always enjoying my word play. Appreciate you always, my friend.
xx
~P.G💋
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Like a sensual song of love and passion that I feel afloat in as I read and love where the river of your words took me. Love the feeling I got from this. Like an erotic romance of singular beauty and artistry.
John
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John, thank you sincerely. I am glad you enjoyed the ride. 🙂
xx
~P.G💋
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What do poets taste like?
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Like mischief and sin. How’s that sound?
xx
~P.G💋
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Sounds like me…💋
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Sensational xx
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Thank you Keith, still aiming to please.
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Superb work. You nailed it.
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Mr. Case, I am honored!
xx
~P.G💋
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LOVE this Title
Sorry
IM STEALING THIS ONE
MY VERSIÓN COMING SOON ???
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Thank you. Hopefully I am worthy of a mention.. lol go for it though!
xx
~P.G💋
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Poetically steamy and hot! Well done!
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M.E, thank you my dear friend.
xx
~P.G💋
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You take your grief and spill it into a poem of great remembrance and timeless ache for this soul who apparently left this earth all too soon. Lyrically beautiful and soulful vision of what he meant to you and how you heal from loss. Love this poem.
John