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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreOn this vehicle with no one behind the steering wheelI am afraid of the windinvisible in nature and yet always present, loomingAnd chewing on its edible paper cutsI grew feathers in my armsAnd I stare back at it with...
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Thank you, Damian. Appreciate it.
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Thank you Damian! “)
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The pleasure is all mine, Fia! Thank you! “)
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Thank you M.E :)) <3
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Read Moreassasin of faith quiet your gunslong out of need war has begunseething design a future of naughtexplain yourself in the brightnessof exploding nuculear energyweapons of mass destructionman devolves time hiccupsdestiny halts takes a deep breathand proceedes forwardsorrow invades where...
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crimsin this is good and true. You can feel this, like a ripple effect in the human psyche.
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thank you beautiful Fia we are in this together and I really feel their pain on my body I think many of us do 💕
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An eyeopening poem to the horrors and effects of wars. Well written!
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hi dearest Me good afternoon we carry the weight of it all of us whether we realize it or not thank you for the love on this 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Into the book it belongs! So true my friend, you nailed the vibe. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I don’t usually like to write about this but it’s on my mind and it occurred to me we carry the weight of it on our bodies I appreciate you 💕
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Yes, my friend. I feel it too.
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thank you Detritus yes it is a heavy burden 💕
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Read MoreIt's been his dream for years a peterbilt shining with power and pride. He's been gone for days chasing that goal, bringing home the truck that's part of his soul. The miles stretch on but my heart stays strong counting down...
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A nice write! Well done, Lora! “)
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Thanks
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A man and his truck
can be
Well…
better than a hotel room
sometimes.Love this piece
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Lol thanks
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Phenomenally penned, Lora. Great storytelling and nice imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks
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Right on thanks
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreOnce Upon a Midnight sky A rendezvous between you and I A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...
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A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)
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Thank you, M.E I love Poe.;))
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a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world-
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You already do.xoxo
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Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶
With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.
Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.
“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌-
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Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal
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You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨
We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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Read MoreDo you think I can make you wetIf I swirl my fingersinside harder fasterI bet.Do you think I can make you screammy name If my tongue swirls insideand drinksyour cream.Do you think I can make them redeven more with a flick of a tongue or a bite for blood to shed.Do you think I...
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Yes, I think you are right. She’s scared of you. Woo. Nice poem
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yes im scary … that is why you are running too…
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Each line reads like throes of little death. Well penned!
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Thank you for your support… appreciate it
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Mmmm…. Ok I’ll shut up and get to work… can you survive that?
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Powerfully penned, Sam. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend
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I’ve been thinking about you all night.
I’m tired of thinking.
Get busy-
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I was busy… if I tell you you won’t believe me
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Don’t you know that I believe everything you say
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wow dearest Sam this is evocative and dangerous 💕
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evocative ?… yes…. dangerous ??? … no… well, maybe… only for those who moan… but thank you for reading and commenting dear Crimsin
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you made me smile 😊
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Cleverly penned, Fia & M.E. Love the back and forth of the write my friends. Appreciate you both.
Damian