Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with incredible storytelling and amazing imagery my friend. Dig the jazz references and the mention of Coltrane & Parker along with your use of chess terminology. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks, my friend.

There are so many layers to this. It’s almost a sultry piece of music accompanied by chess…not the other way around. This is definitely a multiple read piece 😊

tHANK YOU

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Small town and big city is no difference because those in the small town crave to be in the city and those in the big city want to be in the small town. Yet they bring with them the same thing. No change just the recycling.

Powerful.

Small towns and big cities all have in common…both those with small minds and those with open minds. I think this would be a fantastic song, my friend

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is cool. “I have been looking for online ant there are so many looks that the goth girls are doing now that just has my mind saying why didn’t we do that back then?”

thank you beautiful Fia I know right I sometimes will still rock the goth look but not too often these days…my instagram knows what I like that and sends me goth content ❤️

This is interesting. It has a turn of the century vibe to me for some reason. Like someone standing in a crowd, but the only person getting the whole scenario’s message from the one on stage. Your use of powerful words makes it impactful, but not bloated. Great job Crims.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian