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Read MoreMom never discussed the loss of her first baby or the events of that day much after that, maybe once or twice she brought it up to me later in life. Matter of fact now that I think about...
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Thank you Damian, I appreciate all your kind words and taking time out to read.
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just a quick note; Give some spacing (paragraphs) to this, please. It makes it much easier to follow for the reader.
I am curious by nature about the human condition/s, so I’m following your story along. Some line breaks, etc, would really serve this well.-
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Im sorry, my mind is just burnt out, im just dumping baggage not giving thought to structure, ill try to apply your suggestions. Thank you for your kind instruction, help is nice, but if I end up writing the same way my apologies in advance. 😂
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Read MoreDay in, day out the same routine Rolling a stone up a hill, steep and tall Condemned to watch its fateful fall No light at the tunnel's end to be seen Keep it rolling, it's your job Keep it rolling, up to the top You...
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Love this.
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![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
Thank you very much, dear Peter!
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Well done, my friend.
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Thank you for the recognition, dear Abbey!
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Excellent piece Elke. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
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And it’s always a pleasure to read your kind comments, dear Keith. Thousands of thanks!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Elke. Excellent write my friend, it has a lyrical vibe to it. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re kind comments always succeed in making me blush. Loads of thanks, dear Damian!
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What a wonderful thing to read today. The routines of work life do indeed wear us down. Although I tend to daydream much of the day away. I usually have very busy days at work. But, I try to take little breaks to maintain my decent mood the best I can. Your write here is a great testament to how to deal with that.
Awesome result, Elke.-
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, dear Styx! You are absolutely right, breaks are equally important as work. And daydreaming is by far more than an escape from reality. It can be a real fountain of creativity and inspiration . When you don’t wreck your brain was tasks and problems, you are mine is open to receive new ideas. This way, serendipity helped the most brilliant ideas to manifest in reality. Go on like this, it’s a great attitude!
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I have to apologize for the typing errors.
One sentence should read : when you don’t rack your brain… You are open to receive new ideas
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You capture the grind and the small awakenings with quiet grit—the stone never stops, but neither does the heart.
The contrast between monotony and fleeting beauty lands like a soft punch; it lingers in the chest.-
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Thank you very much for your kind comment, Thomas! I’m glad that my poem spoke to you.
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“Keep it rolling, do your duty
Yet be aware of life’s beauty” Priceless!! Well done, Elke! “)
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Read MoreHer feet scorchesthe Earth,with every blistering step. Resentment within herselffor all those long nights she wept. Hating herself for losing control of things;In her mind on a loop— “They will pay.All they do is,Lie,steal,fuck,and scheme.” But now...now,she is a walking revelation. Her heart,...
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Well damn this is intense and written with passion. The ending gave it softness and tenderness. loved it
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Thank you, sweet Fia. xx
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This is incredible, my friend. Written with emotions, that could light a match…smoking a cigarette.
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Handle the flame with care, my dear friend. xx
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Chère PG.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a gentle ending you’ve made of this.
And what a lovely piece of work!
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Gus, it is always a pleasure..thank you for your kind words.
I hope all is well! xx
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. I always dig the layers in your work, fantastic storytelling, tied together with the conclusion of being in a better state of being by the end. Nicely done per usual, I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those who get it, just get it. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words my friend.
xx
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Thank god he came … or we would all have been fucked … nicely done
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Sam thank you for reading! And yeah, or maybe it would have been enjoyable .. I guess we will never know now 😉 xx
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Powerfully penned, Anna. Heartfelt storytelling my friend that comes through in your writes. Authentic emotion from your words pulls at the heartstrings of the reader, in this instance myself. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian