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Read MoreI'm a sinner’s soul with a rebel’s stride Yet a loving heart beats deep inside On my horizon, the shadows grow tall Heavy with clouds before raindrops fall I'm a sin-stained saint, reaching for light Losing the trail in the middle of flight Soft downpour...
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Thank you very much for your kind comment, dear Gus!
Heartfelt greetings!
Elke
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
this line “When love’s blown away, it rains in the soul of mine” I blew out a breath. This is a lovely poem
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Your lovely comment warms my heart and makes my soul smile! Loads of thanks, Fia! xox
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Thank you for the perfect poem to cheer my miserable rainy night in Epping Forest, England! Lovely poetry. HJ x
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Your appreciative comment is at least as lovely! Thank you! May the sunshine in your heart be always brighter than the shadows life’s hardships can cast!
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You’re a lovely woman, wishing like that! Thank you and Best Wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl xx
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Lovely writing Elke.
You don’t post often but when you do I take a breath and smile.🙏
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Smiling back at you with gratitude, dear Peter!
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Excellent crafting. The meter and rhymes are tight! It flows so well, and gives the reader a boost to their mood immediately. Encouraging words are always golden. This is.
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And your kind comments have the ability to bath grey everyday’s life in golden sunshine, dear Styx! xxx
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Beautifully penned, Elke. Excellent write with wonderful words of encouragement my friend. Nicely done, a lovely read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And I highly appreciate you and your always supporting comments, dear Damian! Thanks a lot, my friend! xox
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Hello Elke. Your words and poetry is always so delicately crafted. A beautiful, enlightening piece that showcases your amazing talents. xox
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And your comments are always heartwarming and encouraging, dear Keith! Loads of thanks! XOXO I
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Dear E,
Fab piece. For me, this screams the perfect angel. Heaven sent with a lot of hell. I so enjoyed the imagery and the rhyming meter was great. I’m envious of this form since I can’t do it without sounding like mother goose. Poetry with wings. Well done. H 🌷
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I’m blown away by your kind comment, dear Honoria! 1001 times thank you for your appreciative words! You made my day ! 💐
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Dark edges softened by a tender core—your grit and heart live in the same pulse.
Even in the storm, the poem shines, stubborn and kind, like a soul learning to walk straight.
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Read MoreDomainWe get it in downloads and write in clockwork elves Clockwork machines manifested from clockwork selvesSo many Dali clocks on So many shelves. How we made &Make. Letters to break the fetters and make The soul: Shake. The Earth: Quake.Writing-ignitinginShake n bake, baked. I want...
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I’m digging the whole vibe/quake in this.
And I enjoyed the opening, the use of the work clockwork.
Like there are different gears that shift our writing – hence earthquake!
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Thank you Del…
Hoping to get back into the routine of writing…
Very much appreciated…
After I wrote this…
I was thinking about poetry and prose…
Rhyme and off rhyme…
Or like, in this piece, I feel this sort of
approach, with like…Internal rhyme and rhyme shifts…
Well I was just thinking how it effects
the senses…
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I’m digging the Dali within this. I can see the melting clock as I read this. Yet you’ve awakened that clock, for one last tock!
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Thank you Styx…
Very much appreciated…
Gotta love the Dali… 🙂
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Read MoreNot for Lulz for LightIt is a special kind of alchemy, followingsigns – To which – Most are blind. Drivenby vision. Possessed by mission, assigned.Mission: Divine. Decision, defined. Acrosspathways of a diamond mind to forever findPoetic skies, in which...
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This is well said. I hope humanity will wake up and see that we are here on this earth together so why go after each other?
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Me too, Fia, me too
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Jackie
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for visiting Damian
Hugs
Jackie
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Chère E.,
A lovely write again!
But what other comment can you expect from the NL fanclub?
We can offer a discount on the yearly membership fee? Specially for everyone who comments favorably…
And they will come around. Just wait and see.
The day after tomorrow i’ll be back to read it again.
Warm regards, Gus