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Thank you Thomas.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. That’s a severe case of road rage. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It is a severe case. No doubt. This was a fun write. Thanks my friend.
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Sarcasm – black as the night! You’re a true master of this art. Sarcasm – black as the night! You’re a true master of this art xoxo
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Appreciate the kind words Elke. Thank you!
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Read MoreHere comes the little manHe's really fucking shortBitter from an early ageWasn't born a midget or even a dwarf Never liked having to look upEvery time he needed to speakThey assumed he was an overgrown kidHe's about the height of...
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Aww that’s a sad tale. He should have seeked help
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Seeking help wasn’t in his vocabulary. He was a nut job. Thanks Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Sounds like a Napoleon Complex to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes it does. He needed to be locked up. Thanks my friend.
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Napoleons are a fucking nitemare, especially when one is rather lanky. They start arguments in an empty room and are never, ever wrong. Kid you not. An angry little man once attempted to headbutt me and my stomach felt the full force of his forehead.
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They sure can be a nightmare. WOW that sucks. Did you kick him in the nads?
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This is a meaningful and powerful writing, dear Keith! You are creating attention for those people who are a little different from others and are therefore often mocked. Nobody is without any flaws. All of us should be more tolerant and supportive, and most important of all, focus on inner wealth instead of appearance. Of course, being mocked isn’t an apology but maybe the violence could have been prevented.
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Thanks Elke. I appreciate the comments..always.
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Read MoreThe world is falling apartEncourage sex right from the startTimes like these demand more penetrationLet's stop the hate and encourage masturbationThe politicians, corporations and the mobAll they need is a sloppy blowjobGlobal violence has gone too farSo let's make...
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Powerful and vivid
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Appreciate the feedback.
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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A chant in a procession of dissent, where vulgarity is the incense that burns away false respect.
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Thank you PAR for the read and comments.
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Always here, my friend. How have you been doing?
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Yeah, let’s fuck for peace! Powerful swansong for a rotten world!
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It sure is a rotten world. Thanks Elke. xo
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Now this one I can see a bit of the dark side. There’s a deeply relatable element to this that transcends subject or time. Depending on the point of being, it fits multiple topics. We write from a perspective and when it’s shared, it develops unexpected layers. I would like to have seen it performed during your 15 minutes of fame. It must have had a tremendous draw to it, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I was in a very dark place when I penned this one, I was going through something heavy, and it came out in the words. The one thing I truly love about what we do as writers, is the multiple meanings the reader or listener can take away from our words. We as the writer know what we’re really talking about or going through when we create. The reader doesn’t have those blinders on, they are in fact another point of view, without the writers biases. It is a great little song. It got a response from the crowd. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This makes me feel your pain. The growl had to be wicked on this song.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I was in pain when I penned this, so the words are ripe with it. The growl makes its point known. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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hugs dearest Damian I am person who doesn’t know how to stop loving… I feel this write very deeply beautiful soul ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I don’t know how to stop myself. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your words transform pain into art, dear Damian! I feel your heart and soul dripping from your pen. Intense and beautiful!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s so kind of you to say, what a lovely comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful piece of poetry Damian. Dark and intense! Great work here.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I could be dark and intense sometimes for sure. This was a pretty painful time I was going through, life has a way of fucking with you sometimes! lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Gold star for this effort⭐
What flower are you? A rose, daffodil,poppy?-
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Mmm.. I don’t know. I’m thinking a hydrangea Peter..
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Maybe a rose….beautiful but thorny or horny….lol
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Ooo! I like it, lol 😜
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You’re still churning out some beautiful poetry Lady, Tight
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Thanks sweetness.
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. This one has layers and I dig layers. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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Another outstanding poem, Gawdess!
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Daniel, thank you. xx
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Amazing! You’re a talent.
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Takes one to know one Keith 😉 xx
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xxox
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