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Read MoreCarmyn Today is papa’s funeral, Nonna and Nonno have flown in from Staten Island and so have my aunts, uncles and cousins from all over New Jersey. It all feels wrong. It feels wrong to only see family when someone...
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Damian, it’s my first time ever going this far. Lol. I’ve written a few that got put on the back burner and were never finished, never published, never shared. So I started anew and this particular story has my heart, it just comes to me so effortlessly. I’m so glad you are enjoying, it means so much. Thank you my friend. xx
~P.G💋
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Your storytelling is phenomenal. A magical ride with great description for each character. Marvelous!!! xo
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Keith, you rock! I appreciate you and your kind words as always my friend. Just wait, it gets better.
xx
~P.G💋
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You go Camryn. Do not take that tone. lol
I am enjoying this story a lot and I know a lot of Italian-American people who have that Jersy accent. Love the imagery.-
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Yeah she will not take that disrespect lol.. thank you Fia! xx
~P.G💋
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Powerfully penned, Keith. These stories are always tragic, but not so much with this asshole. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Most of my writes are tragic. I don’t usually like happy endings. Well in this case there is a happy ending. Thanks Damian.
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Goodbye and good riddance! Phenomenal work, Keith, as usual.
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Thank you my friend..xo
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I’ve only seen one other person like that. Well I see him all the time on the news haha. Great ink and lession.
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Oh so true sire. Thanks.
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Powerful.
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Appreciate that Thomas. Thanks.
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Sweet sacrifice
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Hell yeah. Thanks my friend.
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Read MoreDecades ago a man was in love with a womanhe would do crazy acts to seek her attentionhe was a daredevilhe's faced death numerous timeshe's played chicken with trains,jumped off bridges and survived the plunge,climbed skyscrapers,and even imitated some...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. He’s gotta be the unluckiest man in the world, to go out like that my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The Grim Reaper was watching him for a long time. Thanks Damian.
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Wow. Powerful work. Tremendous.
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed.
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The least suspecting thing is what took him out, after all you can only cheat death for so long.. I guess death finally came to collect.
A powerful piece indeed. Love it, Keith.
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Death came to collect. Absolutely. Thanks P.G…You rock!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Like I’ve said in the past, I always go against the grain my friend. Incredible spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s the way to do it. Fuck society and their cowardly ways. Thanks man.
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Sadly, more and more people don’t dare to swim against the stream anymore. They obey to social rules without questioning and don’t speak their own truth, lifeless like puppets on the string. In fact there is nothing more beautiful than being yourself, following your dreams and most important of all thanking for yourself. This isn’t only self-care it also would make this world a better place.
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Be yourself and appreciate what you can give to the world. Thank you Sappho. xox
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Read MoreA black clad leather demon claiming to be the lizard king Mr. Mojo Rising up on stage dancing in the summer rain Doors are infinitely open to perception as he starts to sing While young people bare witness to a world gone...
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I can read the morrison vibes in these verses. A well written Ode! “)
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, M.E. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Just revisited the Olive Stone film The Doors last week. It still holds up. Great! This poem is awesome Damian. The Doors were revolutionary for the few short years they were around. Killer poem.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yes, the late Val Kilmer, was able to capture the essence of Jim. He also sang all the concert footage in the film. They were revolutionary indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I really loved the ending dearest Damian yes powerful words and I love and still love Jim as I shake the cotton from my brain…great write and dedication ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you wholeheartedly, he was one of a kind. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You capture Jim very well here. Excellent work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Well thank you, I tried to capture him to the best of my ability. Appreciate you.
Damian
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There was just something about artist of that time that was just magical. Great tribute.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. There was something magical indeed. To quote Bob Seger: “Today’s music ain’t got no soul.” Appreciate you.
Damian
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This had the cadence of a song to it. His influence drifting through you, perhaps? What a great ode to your inspiration, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well I try, I have my moments. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Still lighting our fire ….
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That he is, the music of The Doors is timeless. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brilliantly penned, P.G. Incredible chapter my friend, you’re a natural storyteller. You sure this is your first time writing stories in this format? lol. Love the character development as well. Appreciate you.
Damian