It’s so cold it burns. The rhyme scheme is excellent.

I can hear & feel this piece loud & clear. Great write.

Dark, sad. Great piece of poetry here.

Cool piece. Lighthouses are an imposing structure.
You can’t miss them unless you are in the trenches!
The way you put them blind to the eye is great.

Thanks for reading..trying to write about something different from my norm..a different level of thought invoking..thank you both for commenting

Are we headed towards this? Thought provoking piece

It feels like it’s already started.
Middle ground is a must in order to coexist.

If I go, I hope it’s fast. So fast I don’t know what happened.

I do kinda believe we are headed somewhere towards this..there is no compromise and many ppl are dug deep in the thought their side is right and the other side is extreme..and we need middle ground..its the foundation of growth and hope..but i feel like our political leaders force us to choose and its a no win choice..we will see what happens..thank you all for commenting and for reading

You would think we would cherish it and realize we are all 1 and the same..instead we have been programmed to be fueled by hate and greed..we are a consumption society and we want everything for ourselves instead of sharing..we have lost our way..the sad part there are still many good people with good hearts that are caught in the cross fire of the political spectrum..anyways thank you for reading and commenting..I appreciate it

To my great regret, I think this could happen. The people may want peace, but the leaders want power and wealth. I hope good will triumph in the end, but I am quite a dreamer.

You have a spooktacular day as well