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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Sabbath and Floyd I dig that. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Excellent. I think I know of this pig and his followers. There may be other interpretations, but I gravitate toward the one that has this swine in the highest of high positions. I shall try to eat more fish.
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Atticus Abbey wrote a new post
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Hoi @Damian,
Inspired on the artwork and your write:
een derde mond – plotseling
smaakte wat naar whiskey
tribal tattoo op haar dij
‘s intimite as can bewhiskey is geen verleiding
mijn teken van gevaar
‘t is anders als ik er af blijf
en alleen proef bij haarAnd translated:
a third mouth – suddenly
tasted a bit like whiskey
tribal tattoo on her thigh
‘s intimate as can bewhiskey is not a temptation
my sign of danger
it’s different if I stay away from it
and only taste it on herYours is a lovely write and this is meant as a hats off to that. And you.
Kind regards, Gus
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Atticus Abbey wrote a new post
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Hoi hoi A.,
There’s a theory that says that the first four sentences determine, if the reader wants to go on reading.
And the four of this poem take me by storm.Never knew that there is a tong exactly the same as the Dutch Tong. Pronunciation the same as in Dutch too.
Ah well. Love the poem needless to say.
Kind regards, Gus -
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“Because some are more loyal than others. ” I think more are easier to break and make them follow than being loyal. I read animal farm. I like the use of the idea here