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Chère C.,
Hope you survived the Valentine thing.
To me, it’s like refined food, it looks like the real thing, but when you bite……I love your poem a lot.
And (like more often than not) I love the artwork as well. And it makes me wonder from what place on earth it is pictured.
As I’ve never seen the moon in this position.Any way, you keep surprising me with your work. And I am grateful that you share it.
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“decorating my inner landscapes with hope” my favorite along with that entire stanza.
Wonderful work crim.
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Read MoreThe Test to Speech is not going to show up on you work unless you click the option. If it has not been removed from your work please reach out to me and I will remove it. If you do...
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Read MoreIt’s there, sometimes In between the strings of the present and the past Hidden there in the fabric of space and reality Making each moment more special than the last It’s there, somehow Emerging from the depths of the subconscious mind As if you can...
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Cleverly penned, Wally. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, always welcome your comments.
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There’s a quiet reverence in this—like you’re circling something sacred without naming it.
That “there” feels like the pulse beneath memory and mind, the kind of presence that steadies a man when the noise falls away.-
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Thank you Thomas. There are moments when feel something at higher conscious level that we feel drawn to it and yet give it that “quiet reverence” without going into detail.
Hope all is well.
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Read MoreMy world grows smaller now,not through accident or fate,but through the quiet pruningof my own choices.Roads I might have takenfall back into the mist.Rooms I used to fill with noisestand empty and at rest.Yet as this world contracts,something in...
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This is a thought-provoking piece.
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Thanks Fia….
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A quiet, stoic acceptance. Letting go takes real strength. I am beginning to learn myself. Thank you.
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Read MoreThere he was… Laying on the cool grass looking up at the sky Longing to be in her sweet arms once again Wishing he could hold her close just one more time Dreaming of a moment that would never end He rests on the...
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend, grabbed me by the heartstrings a bit. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. I’ve always liked writing pieces that have plot twists or bigger reveals at the end. I often think of those who are passing and what their last thoughts may be.
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Wow this a touching piece. The memory of him building the house for her as he is passing away is sweet and sad
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Thank you Fia. I was trying to have this piece read more as a Civil War piece but felt that it’s obscurity in time could be left open to interpretation and connection to the reader.
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian