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Thank you Willow. You are right its the nuances. <3
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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This is a very reflective piece.
I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.
I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.
This is a dark but incredible read. x
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Pitch
There is dark
And there is pitch
It’s funny how dark can feel comforting
And pitch is where the nightmares make a homeI see your silhouette in the dark
Envisioning warmth from lips
Sounds that roll like sweet butter toffee off the tongue
And I know there is only one thing left to doThen there is the pitch
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Very good .. but scary vibe too. Great work ….
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Navina;)
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Of course 🤗
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Love it when you’re pitch dark, Fia. HJx
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Thank you Hjx
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Ellie wrote a new post
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Read MoreA standard Friday morning at work -well, almost standard - I’d arrived late as planneddue to having to make an appointment.Fifteen minutes in, the telephone rang.“Would you like to take the call in the staff room,or are you OK...
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Shock and unreliability of the news is highly felt on this
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It was almost two months ago and I’m still in shock. Hugely.
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I can’t even comprehend a loss this magnitude. All I can offer is the humble hope that you will find at least a modicum of peace in the writing.
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Thank you. I hope writing and music will help, eventually. We also managed to fulfil her wishes and donate her organs, which is a real positive. Nobody should have to go through this, though. She was only 17, was much loved, and it’s just horrific.
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Powerfully penned, Ellie. I can’t even imagine my friend, so sorry for your loss. Writing is therapy, may it bring you some sort of relief. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wally wrote a new post
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Read MoreRewriting Memories If I had turned around that night and went home I believe I would have ended up dead The guilt I held never left me alone Filling my head with never ending dread If I had turned around that night and gone...
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The would have opens one mind of the possibility of things never coming to pass. This is good at making me think about all the would have’s
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Simple…but so emotional. Good one, Fia.
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Thank you , Atticus;))
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A wonderful piece of poetry Fia. This one hits home, literally.
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Thank you, Vision;))
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Yeah…so much said in this. My daughter talks of not belonging anywhere. She’s not Mexican enough for that side of her genealogy and not white enough for the other. Never accepted in either. This cataloging of labels in a stolen land is mind boggling and saddening to me
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This excellent write tells it like it is my friend. Amazingly done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places