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hello dearest Damian for showing your love on this my dark repels some but it’s a part of me as the light is I appreciate you accepting me 💕
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I love it when you write dark poetry. It gives you “I should run” vibes
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously I’m not that bad though lol 💕
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Hoi hoi
This type of dark poems are generally not my favourite, but you make it work.
The artwork makes it a bit lighter.
Like it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus
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Read MoreI feel your presence I'm not scaredyou know me wellmy soul is bared You've been beforethree times indeedyou thoughtI'd be an easy feed Nearly had mebroken shattered I decided life's what mattered You visit mewhen tired and stressed but can't have meI'm...
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hello Benny I love this perspective on depression I never thought of it as a positive but you’re right when settles over us we have to stop and take inventory great write 💕
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I love how deeply layered your ink is. Like I can read it multiple times and find new things. Which is something only great writes can do.
Wonderful, friend.
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hello dearest Nick good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you could read deeper into this one I was kind of unsure of it…I struggled with the ending thank you again for showing your love here 💕
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I adore how you sling the hash, right up my alley. Never at a lost for ink in a time zone bordering on dark.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously you could tell I was holding the dark back I appreciate you 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible storytelling my friend, with lots of layers. Phenomenal write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously my imagination sometimes gets away from me I’m happy it worked 💕
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Read MoreWith each shallowing pulse,my heart bleeds on.With each beat,my heart hollows. With each weakening push of blood through my veins,my heart bleeds on,and my limbs turn cold and deathlike. With each beating of my drum silencing,you can no longer press your...
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Death and passion rolled up in one. The repetition of the heart beating makes it more powerful.
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Sounds like something Type O Negative could put music too. If Peter Steele was still with us. Nicely done, Daniel. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe first time we metYou were dyingI was going to help youI can’t helpbecause you did not want to be savedwe shared a joint on your back porchash droppin between my chuckswatchin the way you sank into silencelike it...
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A well written piece!
Did you use stream of consciouness, Fia-in-collab-mood? HeheheGood job both of you! “)
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Thank you so much, M.E. Actually, no, the idea came to me, and Ambjr was kind enough to see what he could do with it.;))
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Great job…..
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Thank you, Peter;)) I may be heading your way. Hmmm
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I always wonder who’s face that is when I look in the mirror… nice collaboration
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Hmm a mysterious twin lol…..Thank you, Sam;))
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Brilliantly penned, Fia & Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! It’s not easy for a collaboration to make my book. But this was seamless, incredible collab you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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We made it into the book? Yes, yes, yes. Thank you, Damian<3
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This is such a well blended collaboration. And just real and raw. As good as it gets.
Great job you two.
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Thank you, Nick;)) Appreciate that
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. This has so many shades of depth my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian