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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Pitch
There is dark
And there is pitch
It’s funny how dark can feel comforting
And pitch is where the nightmares make a homeI see your silhouette in the dark
Envisioning warmth from lips
Sounds that roll like sweet butter toffee off the tongue
And I know there is only one thing left to doThen there is the pitch
Alone and n…Read More5 Comments-
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Thank you, Navina;)
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Of course 🤗
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Love it when you’re pitch dark, Fia. HJx
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Thank you Hjx
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Read MoreA standard Friday morning at work -well, almost standard - I’d arrived late as planneddue to having to make an appointment.Fifteen minutes in, the telephone rang.“Would you like to take the call in the staff room,or are you OK...
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Shock and unreliability of the news is highly felt on this
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It was almost two months ago and I’m still in shock. Hugely.
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I can’t even comprehend a loss this magnitude. All I can offer is the humble hope that you will find at least a modicum of peace in the writing.
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Thank you. I hope writing and music will help, eventually. We also managed to fulfil her wishes and donate her organs, which is a real positive. Nobody should have to go through this, though. She was only 17, was much loved, and it’s just horrific.
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Powerfully penned, Ellie. I can’t even imagine my friend, so sorry for your loss. Writing is therapy, may it bring you some sort of relief. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreRewriting Memories If I had turned around that night and went home I believe I would have ended up dead The guilt I held never left me alone Filling my head with never ending dread If I had turned around that night and gone...
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The would have opens one mind of the possibility of things never coming to pass. This is good at making me think about all the would have’s
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreBlow Daddy Front seat At a railroad crossing Long freight train moving slowly Eyes closed She’s working her magic Deep South Things amble along He’s about to release Last car passes Horns honk He spews Onward with ecstasy Rear view mirror Guy behind him is pissed Let him wait
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Haha,,,I love how you show what is happening all around. Then the let’m wait had me smiling
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This man doesn’t just cum and go.
Need time to enjoy the after glow.
That fuck bag can wait …Thx Fia
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Hey man, how’s it going? It’s been a while since I read your posts. Great write. No apologies here. Fuck em!
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Hey Keith
Word up ?
Haven’t written much since the DUP demise but thought I should contribute some smut again !!Thx bro
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Hi P.,
I may have told you I’m a quarter French.
And in France you can get away with pretty much anything as long as you mind your language.
Like this one. Direct, no unnecessary chatter, love it!
Needless to say I’m a huge fan of your writes.
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There used to be TV show called DRAGNET. The main character played a police detective and he was known for saying “just the facts” .
So Gus, that’s what I modeled my writing on. Just the facts. Say what I want to say and not much more.A blow job doesn’t need many words, just the passion of someone giving and someone getting …
Thanks for your comment…
Stay tuned
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Passionately penned, Speak. Another excellent write my friend. You always bring you A-game when it comes to telling a story or painting us a picture. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian
I don’t writhe much anymore but occasionally a thought comes to mind and I pen it.
Appreciate the nod !
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Hahaha, don’t know if you intended the humor but it’s there. What else is there to do while waiting on a mile of rail cart. To be honest we really miss those long trains passing by forcing the entire south to slow down even more. America doesn’t use but a fraction of it’s railway potential anymore, we use to move shit
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Humor, mirth and a little attitude …
I’ll tell you one thing, that woman knows what she’s doing …
She calls it her salvation à la mode ….
I call it bliss
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Atticus Abbey wrote a new post
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Read MoreLike opening a bottle of wine and letting it breathe aged from the tempest corpse a heady scent of decay in the carrion jar of our hollowed cathedral with a lingering caress of your divine worn grace mimicking the...
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That beginning gives life to this poem even though you bring attention to death. I like the turn in position
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Thank you Fia, for reading and commenting.
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Very good .. but scary vibe too. Great work ….