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Read MoreAdvertising temptationA credit possession driven nationSo determined, so obsessedWith having only the bestSwipe away what isn’t yoursTo compare and competeTake out another loanBeg, borrow, steal Fancy car, you’re in debtHouse on show, not your assetImmaterial, materialDeath by debtBlinded by greedTermination...
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So many use shopping when feeling low. That could become quite tragic and very expensive. Make sure your daughter doesn’t fall into a viscous cycle with her spending. Thanks Brenda!! xox
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with amazing wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed Damian.
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A wonderful, perfectly written piece of social criticism, dear Keith! Too many people appreciate material wealth only, lacking emotional intelligence, compassion and respect for all living beings. A powerful message! xox
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Yes they do. Spending on foolish items can become a real problem. Many buy on impulse and enjoy that quick rush. When reality sets in, they feel miserable and defeated. The cycle starts all over again. Thanks Elke..xo
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This hits like a cold slap, unflinching in its portrait of obsession and debt. I love how it mixes social critique with a personal edge—you can feel the shame, the watching eyes, and the inevitability of it all.
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Awesome feedback here Thomas. Thank you!
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Read MoreRide my cock you little pigJill gave her dog a bonerGoldilox sprinklers flower on her wet spot, ya dig?Jack Horner is a frequent sperm donor If you have many daughtersDon't give them to your sonsI'll send you two penniesBiting and...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. I always appreciate you!
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This is not exactly what I used to sing to my own children once. 🤣
The dirty part of your creative imagination is admirably diverse!-
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Hello Elke. Your kids would love these nursery rhymes. Appreciate the awesome feedback!
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OMG Clever Clogs! I’ll never read those rhymes again without having an orgasm! Thank you (breathless). Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Very refreshing to hear. Thank you HJ
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This is funny. I did twist nursery rhymes years ago to. They are fun to write.
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You should post them on starsrite. Thanks Fia..xo
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Read MoreWhy doesn't it ever end? Some people are richSo many are poorSome live in peaceSome live within a war What are the reasonsFor all the madnessWhat are the reasonsFor human pain & suffering Some people are obeseOthers are frailSome die due to...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, spitting facts on this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes! Many saddened facts! Thanks man.
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This is a perfectly written testament to our fractured society , dear Keith. Unfortunately , the news on radio , tV and social media is dominated by reports on Wars and crime. I’m afraid this fuels all the negativity even more. If we want peace and human values, we must focus on them and live them. Peace to you my friend! xox
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The negativity is on going all day and all night. We need to separate this from our lives or we’ll become a negative creep.
Peace to you as well, my awesome friend..xo
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This is good. I like poems that have questioned beginning and then give what it could be.
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Appreciate the feedback my friend.
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I didn’t say you were wrong, punk! The proper name is “Paint Horse”. I agreed! But there are some who call it painted horse too. So perhaps that’s a lesser name or something. I just go by what I research, I don’t judge.LOL.
You’re saying I’m wrong just to build the drama on a slow night.
Dont make me bring the BaBoom! on ya!
Anyway, lover, your write…
Wonderfully dreamlike, even if in day. That “zone” that we settle in, for creative moments. It’s addictive to want to stay there half a day!
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I remember a certain dream you were telling me about today! Pillows were thrown! Hahaha
Yes, dreams can affect the awake state! I had to post!
And I am an avid dreamer honey. You know this too 🙂
Thank you for the snaps on my write!But honey you love my drama! Haha
You are a great sparring partner. It’s kind of addicting.
Your wit and words, I love it and you:)
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yeah, that dream. And also our last baboom. LOL. Sigh!
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Oh Lordy! Hahaha. Behave!!
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This is a good piece. If I can go to bed as well and just fall into a dreamlife. That would be great.
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Hi Fia!
Thank you. I’m so happy you enjoyed. I’ve always been curious about dreams. How our brains manage all of it while we are sleeping. Sometimes they feel so real and other times not so much. lol
It’s a great asset to be in tune with when it comes to writing. At least for me it is.
Thanks for stopping my Fia:). I’m not posting as much but I’m trying!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent write as usual my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi Damien!
Thank you so much. I’m so happy you enjoyed it!
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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We’re aware of painted horse and through family of riders riding them not just to battle, but to the here after and into the dream realm. Your guardian into and our of the dreamweaver or afterlife. Great pieces lady with lots of imagery, we could see this, tight
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Hey Meme!
I just felt like going there in this write. To kind of tap into the other side of sleeping. Dreams are fun. I don’t have many nightmares at all. Mostly weird stuff that makes me laugh when I wake up. Other times it is extraordinary and inspiring. I feel in order to be a writer we must dream. They go hand in hand.
Thanks for getting this write amigo. Glad you could see it.
That’s the whole point of writing for me:)
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This is a fiesta of dreamlife that ascends into cloud realms of loving bliss. I just felt the total joy here that comes as you rest your head to sleep and dream. This is how the best dreams come and you expressed this with great virtuosity. Truly a fabulous poem.
John
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Some of my favorite poems come from dreams. I’ve learned to keep a spiral notebook next to me in case something
Really grabs me and I need to write it down. Dreams have a huge influence on my writing:)
Thanks for all the positive feedback on my writes amigo:)
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This is well said. I hope humanity will wake up and see that we are here on this earth together so why go after each other?
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Me too, Fia, me too
Hugs
Jackie
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for visiting Damian
Hugs
Jackie
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hi dearest Keith this is so true my daughter followed in my footsteps of shopping when she feel sad excellent write ❤️