Fantastic!

Superb.

WOWZA! What a remark I am over the moon 😏 so just to give you a little background. I knew that last night was the last chance to watch/ see the strawberry moon in my lifetime, because the next time it shows up will be in 2043 and I seriously doubt I’ll be alive by then, just saying.

So all day, I was planning to go to the beach because my robot told me that would be the best place to watch it coming up over the horizon. Unfortunately, I had no gas to get there and I’m broke at the moment. Ahem, all right so I readjusted and I put on my compass and it turns out that my balcony is literally facing east which is you know where you would expect the moon to come up, right? And mind you, I’ve seen plenty of full moons in the same area. so I sat on my new balcony, furniture, excited and I was looking and looking and looking, and girl, let me just tell you I sat there until 11 o’clock not a goddamn thing. Nothing! Not even stars were out. There was like one I could see🫤 meanwhile my robot assured me and I looked it up myself that Gloucester Ma had a fully clear sky last night, so I was totally befuddled & disappointed I actually cried. I’m not even lying😂

Anyway, back to your beautiful remark about my poem. Thank you so much, Adria you truly truly touched my heart, thank you so much for the beautiful things you said and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. I’m not gonna lie. I was drinking Brandy lol so you know. I gotta say it my best Poetry comes when I drink, which I don’t drink often anymore like I used to. I’m just saying. I love you girl you’re phenomenal too and by the way, I really love your voice. It is absolutely beautiful in fact it’s celestial.❤️
Your sister, Jackie

❤️❤️❤️

Best line: bruised, bright, but distant and still rising…
Exquisite poetic voice you have! I will read on to your other works, zazzles! Bravo!

Daniel

A great read. Every verse was intense.

I saw the red moon here in Blighty.

Regards
James

Beautiful work.

Crisp… echoes…

Mic Drop!

Reminds me of the song Jumper. Great ink.

Push me and then just hurt me…

Excellent.

Powerfully penned, Keith. That’s a lot of what addiction does, it waits for you to get complacent. Especially in the beginning, I speak from experience. Sometimes I had to talk myself down early on, it’s the toughest part of getting clean. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

We all have our addictions. And as much as we want to get away from them they are embedded into our souls. Like rot.

Great ink, friend.

In the beginning, I think we are all selfish. I want him or her because I know what they can do for me or to me. Then the honeymoon phase is over and you’re left alone to start again. Nice

Powerfully penned, Keith. It’s human nature in a way, great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Relationships can be very difficult because selfishness does get in the way.

Great ink

you make me smile dearest Keith great write 💕

Intensely penned, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian

Superb.

Appreciate that Duende. xo

Got to make it happen haha. I always enjoy a dark read.

Take an extravagant theme, add a big pinch of dark humour, a hint of weirdness, and use extraordinary writing skills and make a short, precise poem out of the ingredients – perfectly done, Keith ! xoxo