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    Happy New Year 2026

    There once was a rock that fell from the skyLanding on a planet blue and green to the eye Not knowing that there were people watching in awe Seeing that this thing is not what they saw For it was not a...

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    My Obsession

    Shall I tell you a story or keep it in a poem Shall I tell you a story or take you home   Some verses are hidden secrets that should not be spilled love requited and forbidden but if I tell you, my lips would not be...

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    • So this is your song if only…I like it.

    • A song played on a radio, as a teen-aged girl dreams of that secret crush she has. I’m sure that this lyrical gem has been played for so many young women, and men. It’s called a crush because thats what it feels like in our chests, huh!

    • Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. I really like this a lot. Appreciate you, cuz.

      Damian

    • Chère F.,
      Every time I discover more reasons to love your write to bits.
      And this is also such an event.
      At the end of your poem, you offer a possibility to choose. Simply wonderful, but it reminds me of a song I once wrote. A long long time ago. And its title is Bevrijdingsdag. Translated: liberation day. I wouldn’t write a song with such a title today, but that’s another story.

      The chorus of the song is forceful and perhaps a bit extreme. It translates like this:

      You said ‘Married’ – and I said so what
      I’d love to choose if I may
      Don’t talk to me about divorce
      Everyday’s liberation day

      And then I asked the public:
      You’ve heard it. She said ‘married’. But didn’t say who is married, so it’s up to you to choose.
      – is he married
      – is she married
      – are they both married, but not to each other

      Raise your hands!

      And I would let the public decide. And I would have three songs ready to fit the decision.
      A situation, prone to personal ‘colouring’. My personal colouring that is. I’m not On a stage for nothing.

      Yes, a bit of a long reply. But maybe an idea 💡 for if and when you’re going to do some beat poetry. The public will love you all the more for this kind of surprises. Really.
      I’m a huge fan of open mic evenings; maybe I can transfer some of the excitement to you.
      Other than that: keep them coming, please.

      Warm regards, Gus

      • I do not mind long replies. I am happy that this ignited a memory and that you are encouraging me to do open mic. I would love to read it. No worries. I will use a translator. Thank you for loving my work. poems and stories.

    • Very nice indeed ma’am .. Neville 😎🌻👍

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    Poetic Voyeur

    Why am I drawn to your writing? I'm not sure myself.  Is it because I can see the damage and every word Or is it that I can see you    See, you get so engulfed in every word  To make your point come across? It's...

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    Stars Rite Due Process

    At Stars Rite, we want to make it clear that no member is removed from the site without due process. We believe in fairness, transparency, and maintaining a safe and respectful writing community. Below is an outline of our...

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    Girl with The Sad Eyes

    Hey girl.You’re about 21,your life has just begun.And still,your smile doesn’t reach your eyes.Maybe, you’ve gotten wise;or maybe you realizedthat you don’t know where you’re going.you’ve got two kids that you’re toting;Life is hard.You’re in school and working two...

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    • You always find yourself when you don’t realize it.
      23 sounded like a good year of life for you!

    • Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write with a very powerful message. Writing is therapy I agree with you completely. No matter how creative I get with a poem or lyrics there is always a therapeutic quality even as simple as getting something off my chest. Very relatable piece lets me know I’m not alone in the world. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damian. I love that we can turn such pain into such beauty with the art of our choice.. there really is something poetic about it, ironically. Lol.

        Thanks for reading my friend. xx

    • PG

      When the darkness surrounds you and you think of the unthinkable remember this.
      You have to be alive to find peace.Death just brings death.
      Now you take care and keep writing.

      🙏💋🙏

    • This is powerful and the images and words are delicately constructed. Always move forward PG, never look back. Well written.

      • The pain I’ve endured has always been a stark reminder that I’m alive. I’m grateful for that.. always moving forward. Thank you, Vision. xx

    • Great piece. There’s also a hidden but great message in here. Yes, kick your kids out of the nest. But let them know if pressure builds, if the world becomes to much, the door opens both ways and they’re always welcome. So many people commit the acts that they do, endure the abuse that they do because they have no where’s to return to

    • Your muse has the answer of your being, so continue to let the words flow and live as you dream…but don’t any wooden nickels, are flying monkeys.

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