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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreDeep with inA soundEscaped!Catching the airShock and aweCreated the first audienceForwardSymbols and representationsCaptured thoughtOn walls and clayForwardLife ripped from rootsFibrous parchmentCharcoal wordsKnowledgeForwardQuill and inkThin papyrusLines replace symbolsLoops entice the eyesForwardScreens and buttonsGreen and yellowFlashing cursiveForwardTexts, short formsMeanings misunderstoodNew vocabularyEver...
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Right, never go backward. Thank you, Keith
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Thank you, Dragon-fire. I want to know what’s next.
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This makes me want to chase down a Woolly Mammoth and scribble my initials on his testicles.
“We didn’t start the fire!
It was always burning
since the world’s been turning!”-
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Girl, you hit me up with Billy Joel? Love that song. Dk you know I am 4’11”? I will need an extension later to reach mammoth testicles. You are a little taller than me. You will have to climb on my shoulders. lol
You are funny. Thank you, Dk., xoxo
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Fia. Love the flow and the imagery is stellar my friend. Nice spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you ☺️ appreciate that Damian
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Fia, our world is ever evolving, but it’s refreshing to have you take us through time. Can’t wait to see what’ll come next. Brilliant piece my dear friend. xx
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Thank you P.G. Let us see what’s next
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read Moresolitude is a self efficient temple welcomed... greeted... like the warmth of the womb... anger is the fuel of turmoil seduced... infused... spawning the words of poets... misery is the darkest mistress beautiful... deceitful... wicked in every manipulation... pain spreading through the veins crimson... suspicion... making colors bleed truth... reunited with the past forgotten spiritual... ritual... skeletons restrained...
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That was amazing. I love the growly voice. Damian;))
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Fia. So glad you liked the write and performance my friend. The growl was the only thing vocally I never questioned myself about. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous work. You nailed it.
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the piece my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool idea with the vocals and the words are killer. Nice job Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the piece my friend. Yeah, it was a way to incorporate with the death growl. Which I thought went well juxtaposed to the spoken part. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’ve always enjoyed the voices that have gravel in their DNA. This is a little different for you but still 100% you. And brilliant! Love seeing all the facets in different light, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the performance my friend. It took me almost 15 years to be comfortable enough to share these pieces. I have three more, but I can’t find the words to them. lol. I was not in the best place in those recordings, I was drinking like a fish, which makes sense being that I’m a Pisces. lol. But it was different, because I was different. I was not the person I am now. But I’m not afraid to be me anymore, so why sit on the material. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian!!! Oh Damian, this is….. Wow, it’s not often I’m rendered speechless. I like the transition from your voice to the death growl. Very masculine, very sexy. It’s like that old saying, “two sides of the same coin” I think that applies here…maybe, lol. Same person, two different sides of him but they have the common goal of being released. The death growl was the cherry on top of this beautiful piece. I applaud you my friend! xx
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, P.G. So glad you enjoyed this piece. It does have a, Dr. Jekyll, Mr. Hyde kinda vibe. Glad you loved the growl, very cool. At one time in history it was kinda frowned upon by the masses to death growl growing up. Times change or so they say. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Very impressive, Damian. I really like your voice and the lyrics were perfect.
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Thanks so much for reading/listening and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you enjoyed the performance my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Great ink. It had a great flow.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice work, sir. I will write more later (I got here in a weird way and wasn’t going to leave a review at all, but I saw at the bottom of this piece there was your audio file — with another that has this piece read (horribly) by an AI voice. You can leave it if you wish, or you can delete it by adding “excludetx” as another tag on the page where you added this piece to your pages. In any case, I’ll be back when I can spend more time here. As a for
Former performance artist and now a humble poet (well, at least, a poet), I want to enjoy this at my leisure.
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Nice work, sir. I will write more later (I got here in a weird way and wasn’t going to leave a review at all, but I saw at the bottom of this piece there was your audio file — with another that has this piece read (horribly) by an AI voice. You can leave it if you wish, or you can delete it by adding “excludetx” as another tag on the page where you added this piece to your pages. In any case, I’ll be back when I can spend more time here. As a for
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Fixed it brother. Didn’t realize the AI voice was even there. Thank you for your kind words, FD. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Poetic Gawdess and
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Poetic Gawdess wrote a new post
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Read MoreNo longer blindfolded by your antics, or your words that never rang true. I’m free of the hold you had on me. But now what is there for me to do? I have to reacclimatize to this new life. A life without you. I’ve loved you, much...
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If you love because she has nice eyes or he has a great body your love is based on conditions.When conditions change lovers turn to losers.
Which are you?Be careful how you answer as it will reveal much about your nature.😘 Another good write btw
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True. I’ve never been one to base my love off of aesthetics alone, though they may be pleasing to the eyes it does not fulfill every need/desire. Also, looks don’t pay the bills! I’m a lover all day.. (I also like my man rugged with a dad bod😉) Thanks for the read and the comment! xx
~P.G💋
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Beautifully penned, P.G. Into the book it belongs! Love is a gamble, indeed. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, as always I appreciate you! Thanks for reading my friend, means the world to me. xx
~P.G💋
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Hello P.G. Love is tough and love usually is by the way the person looks at first. We want that outside beauty but tend to forget where the true love should lie and that’s within. Intriguing piece my friend. xo
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True indeed, my friend. Thank you for reading! xx
~P.G💋
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Tremendous work. Powerful writing.
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Thomas, thank you so much for reading and for your kind comment. I really appreciate it! xx
~P.G💋
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An emotional poems. Well written!
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M.E thank you xx
~P.G💋
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Sometimes you want that love so badly because you’re a passionate person who needs to love. But even though you know better you can’t stop who you love but who doesn’t love you back.
The quotient of love plays games Sometimes. I always say go for love because when you get it right there’s nothing quite like it.
But you need to be strong if you have doubts and you were strong to finally realize that.You didn’t win the love game but you’re not a loser because you chose to love yourself and make necessary changes ….
An amazing introspective wriite
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PoetSpeak, that was well said! I appreciate your read and kind comments. Thank you xx
~P.G💋
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…the journey to self-realization is always worth it
Much respect
Naaj
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI never said being with me was easy Assumptions turned you down the wrong path Where are you going? It better not be away from me Didn’t you say I was the only one who made you feel I taught you things no one...
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You didn’t strike me as a jealousy type. But I like surprises! “)
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You do? I love to watch what is mine… play. But. Everyone has a limit. ;)) Thank you M.E
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian ;))
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“Baby, you drank so much of me
I am seeping out of your pores”What an amazing couplet this is. Wow. Every single line of this piece stands alone as so significant.
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Thank you, Dk. I wanted to show how jealousy can be over whleming.;))
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Great write. Jealousy can be a two way street. When two people are in love and there both the jealous type, that can be quite toxic.
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It can be very toxic. Agreed. ;))
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damn good write
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Thank you, Ambjr
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Superb writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Always move forward. Never in reverse. Cool poem Fia.