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    Lost Me

    I tried so hard to save you,and in the process, I lost me.Forgetting all the things I wanted,I abandoned my own needs.I put you first,and in turn what did that get me?A knife in the back,and a broken heart,when...

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    • The audio, the image and of course the poem is perfect in it’s delivery and meaning. So much pain and sorrow pour out of this one. Nice work PG. xo

    • The odds are never in your favor trying to save a broken individual, someone that someone else broke. What good to existence is two broken individuals? You’ll never be a pair, a pair of what kintsugi or mosaic pieces. Many will relate to this because of human’s diamond in the rough complex. We’ve all tried to save a destined train wreck, Tight

      • True enough…maybe I just suffer from a savior complex..even after being let down multiple times. I guess I never learn my lesson. Thanks for reading. xx

    • It’s true
      I’m a healer and I can’t resist the broken or else I’m just drawn to what I suffered and I try to teach by experience. Call me a mentor or just call me for dinner. Yin gets Yang.
      Sometimes I’m successful and other times not.

      Never feel bad for trying PG.
      I feel ya

      X

    • Your voice and your words were just beautiful.
      In my experience, the healers of this world were once the broken.They are the only ones that can heal the broken.
      I don’t know if I’m a healer or not but my favourite saying is “don’t let anyone suffer alone”. So,I help where I can and sometimes I get hurt but helping is a joyous experience and far outweighs the hurt.
      Hope that makes sense.
      Terrific write 🙏

      • It does Peter, thank you. I just have this thing of trying to see the best in people. And I want to help, but it’s exhausting when they don’t try to help themselves.. it might be foolish. But call me a fool.. I’ll never stop trying. Thanks for your kind words and wisdom. xx

    • hello lovely poetic one I feel your deep ache and passion…this is so beautiful in its pain and truth ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, PG. This one pulls at the old heart strings my friend. Excellent write and your narration sends the message home. Healers are often the ones most subject to getting hurt, we sacrifice ourselves and our needs by always putting them on the back burner to help others, especially in our relationships. I speak from my own experience but it sounds like you’ve been there too. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you for reading my friend!! It’s sad that so many can relate..but lets us know that we are truly not alone..

        xx

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    Blind Fury

    It’s dark. And as much as I am into kinks, This is all new to me... Blinded by mere cloth Restraining my vision Yet my senses, Are heightened I’ve never felt so alive Every hair on my skin Is standing up on end... But I eagerly...

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    missing

    you don't see me anymoresomewhere in the mist I lost youpainful realization, I reached for you and you were gonethe melody of our love still play within memy thoughts fell, my heart stoppedyou were missinginside my dwelling place I...

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    When No One Is Looking

    Who are you? When no one is looking? When the world is asleep, and everyone is tucked in?Who am I? When you think about it, it’s a rather broad question.The answers are deep and dark; Like an abyss, that could...

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    • Truthfully penned, PG. An honest and open write my friend. I can relate, this was powerfully precise and authentic. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damian. It’s always refreshing to write something different, something true, and honest. We all know what I’m known and loved for…but we all have demons, I’ve just decided to dance with mine. Thank you for reading my friend. xx

    • Wow! My gosh, this is an amazing write, it’s humanism going sideways, written with clarity.

    • DAMN! This piece is in your face and Hardcore! No apologies written here. Enter at your own risk! Love it PG..xox

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    hiccup

    it's a brutal memory time bends and refracts fractured parts of your soulfated pain echoing through spacelips curled in a screamhurdled along until full stoprotating on our axis, we spinwe forget then come to rememberfabled wisdom why repeat?thrown into...

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