Reject me with a fire
That makes me want to dance
In a flame that won’t burn out
And a heat that thrills with chance
Throw me in your waters
Hold me under, make me drown
Until I’m shaking from the secret
Of a taste that can’t be found
Reject me with a coldness
I can feel in every breeze
With a chill that stings the quiet
Of the whispers now at ease
Leave me deep inside the frost
Make it linger, make it bite
Until I cannot feel the numbing
We surrendered in the fight
Reject me with a hunger
That mercy cannot feed
Until the body feels the wonder
Of a heart that will not bleed
Leave me thirsty for the taste
Make it pouring, make it rain
Until the end is worth the mystery
And the thrill is worth the pain











hello dearest Brandon I hurt like this this is a special write ❤️
Thank you for reading! Nice to hear from you. I hope the piece gives you some kind of comfort.
Thank you Crimsin. Hope you can see this.
Thank you for reading. Touched this speaks to you.
Sorry for all these multiple replies. The system was glitching
Thank you Crimsin. I hope this piece gave you comfort.
Powerfully penned, Brandon. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you Damian!
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I can see it.