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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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My word, you really have entered into the spirit of this most hauntingly chilling time of year .. Bravo & likewise awarded the 🖤 of horror .. Kindest Regards, Neville 😎👍
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hello dearest Neville dark writing is a thing of mine I’m happy you enjoyed this…I always write what is on my mind I think it’s nightmares thank you for the great comment ❤️
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Well, this makes me think of a fallen angel, caught in the dilemma of righteousness and vengence. By the grace of God, perhaps, yet there is an underlying energy here too. I like the whirlwind of thoughts going on here. I can sense your struggle through your words, quite easily. Well expressed Crimson.
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hello dearest Styxian good evening you know how it is as a writer and you have something on your mind and even if you don’t really want to you have to get it out… thank you I deeply appreciate your interpretation it’s just how my mind works…I guess this goes along the lines of serial killers they always say they are doing the work of God and really who is to say they are wrong? ❤️
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hello dearest Neville I think you always meant somethingto this person… people come and go in my life and it is the nature of this fact that sends my soul wandering great write ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend, this has layers. Nicely done, sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Neville, many snaps and hell yeses, plus a ‘bag of chips’, as an old friend used to say.
In a similar situation, my first wife had tears in her eyes when she handed me the papers to sign. Maybe it was thinking about failure, cause what she said was “we were supposed to be forever.” True enough, but we had both changed and couldn’t find what we once had. It was extremely disheartening, since it was her who had the affair and ended it.
Life is strange I think. Why is it that even as memories become “fragmented” and “distanced”, they never go away completely, they haunt, reminding me of my failure to love her better.
Curt
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Ha’ you can beat an egg & a drum of course but you just can’t beat a decent bag o chips now can ya eh’ .. Thanks loads for stopping by these words of mine Curt .. it’s a funny old game isn’t it .. life I mean .. and what we can’t change or forget often makes for half decent poetry .. Kindest regards and best wishes for a bloomin brighter set of tomorrows .. Neville
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This kind of put me in a sad mood, separation, memories… the human psychic. when we think we moved on, yet suddenly something comes up and everything comes to the surface. yes true, life is unpredictable, what we might think it’s love in a moment, later it might appears it’s not, what we were once, later we might not be. from togetherness to separation.
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Please excuse my delay in getting back to You my friend .. thanks a million for feeling these words .. You can obviously see write through me .. I love your visits & your insights .. Your ever-friend Me 😎🌻⭐⭐☀️🌞💛👍
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