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    In The Dark

    Did you ever see your loneliness Or close down and take the painAfter every piece of hope was goneDid you give yourself the blameDid you start the fireOr just supply the sparkWas it hard to run In the dark? Did...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brandon. That’s an amazing write for anyone, makes it that much more impressive at 16 years old my friend. I still I have my first notebook as well, have never posted them though. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Damian,
      Beyond humbled by all your comments. Happy to be here!

    • You wrote this at 16? What a deep thought. What a wonderful beginning. Welcome to Stars Rite Brandon;)

    • Thank you! You made me smile this morning.

    • There’s a raw, searching honesty in this. you can feel the questions shaping the voice that would come later. The repetition of the dark works like a pulse, steady and human. A strong beginning, and you can already see the spark you kept.

      P.S. I’m so glad you broke out that notebook my friend.

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