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Read MoreA dying love turns everything gelid bodies frozen solid pain entombed by fleshy permafrost so cold limbs might snap off tears could turn to icicles which frozen tear ducts can't release hateful words leave lips to turn to sleet in the cold air the body,the heart,the mind cannot survive...
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Yes I noticed sometime after I’d posted that Indie had posted something similar.
Clearly, she is a rare talent just like me…. rotflmfao -
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It’s that push pull poison that gets us every time
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) and
NAVINA are now friends
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Powerful work. Sharp and vivid.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Cleverly penned, Keith. This is great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks
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Geese sinks my swan.. clever. Enjoyed this
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xo
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xo
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Read MoreI almost bit her neck,but her puffed, glossy lipsTrapped cigarette smokeI don't smoke—still, I craved a drag.Snow White bit my Adam's apple.The wicked and the weakface in the eyes of a troubled mirror.Heart beating in her mouth,she...
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Powerfully penned, M.E. A nice trilogy of poems my friend. Stellar imagery. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
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Tremendous work. Powerful and dark.
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Thank you, Thomas! As always “)
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“Snow White bit my Adam’s apple.”
Ridiculously good…Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and for the comment! “)
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Thank you, Aidra! Means alot to me “)
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Now this…wow. Wicked and dark just like I like.
That line: “Snow White bit my adam’s apple” Mmm— so good. 😈 Thank you for sharing! xx
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And not to mention, there’s Medusa :’) sooooo goooood!!!!
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Thank you! This was an old poem. I thought to repost on StarRite. I am glad you had a bite! 😉
Whispering (Yes, I do have a hard on Medusa, me too) lol
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And a delicious bite it was! I’m all for the oldies but goodies 😉 and I figured we shared the love for Medusa, hehe. xx
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Super creative take on these classic characters. I can see this poem being written into some anthology show or film. Nice work M.E
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Thank you, my friend. I have envisioned this “fairy tale” for a while. And I am satisfied with the result. Its going to be quiet a movie of it. Haha
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All I wanted was love,
but I didn’t want to get my hands dirty.Wow, this is a great line for Medusa. Enjoyed this
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Thank you, Fia!
Thats one of my favorite lines me as well. “)
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Thank you Dragon-Fire! I appreciate it. “)
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M.E and
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